Fresh, Consistant, Tight! Just How I Like My....lol! Good Show!
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Fresh, Consistant, Tight! Just How I Like My....lol! Good Show!
Ok am gonna break this down and rate it on how i felt the verses. Having read this you all came dope in the aspect of putting it together. So ill run down the contence that i felt ... and of course the verse structure and flow :)
Speak E.Z
Your verse had a very nice flow and structure. I liked the way you approached the subject and made me relise what rap mean to you .. from all views ( friends on booz) . didnt use much complex vocab but none was needed as simplicity made this verse dope. Good work
Mentill -
wow. Your verse was like a poetic piece converted. Really found the intro touching as well .. showed your mind evolving to go and learn new things.. than through your verse proved that. Hmm as far as the verse itself structure wasnt bad and flow was oright to. Very hard what you done there and required skill . Props
Trapt Wit
this was a bit different. Not into the whole ganster thing but for what u did it was good. I mean flow was good structure oright to. I just connected with the top two more. Still I liked the intro to your piece and didnt think it would turn out like that . But obviously you got skill, and i would love to see it applyed to anothe subject. No hate. Prop takes more skill to write about something which doesnt click with you ( i dunno if it does )
Diverse
very nice. Excellent structure and flow. Feeling your whole verse ...Iv read stuff from you and you never let the reader down. Always make your drops a plesant read. I hate when i have to struggle to read something you make it interasting.... nothing bad i can say really
The Realist
very nice way to sum up this extra - ordinary piece. You kinda in my eyes brought the best outta the previous drops and showed the reader where the rap game is going. Structure and flow were perfect. Top work
Overall- It was an original idea. And you made it work really well. All did a top job so i cant really hate on anyone or rank who came off better. 9/10
if you have time check out
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116574
Ps Escuse the spelling.. its pretty late here
Have edited above post.
Upping....
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Originally Posted by Eki
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told you i`d give feedback, TeeaRe
first verse, expressed his emotions nicely - reminded me of the beginning of Loose Yourself. `Hip Hop will be the teacher of everything I know` - pretty nice analogy. Flow wasn`t too complex and seemed on point.
second verse, good multies and would sound nice on audio. Content was alright - portrayed the battle orientation well.
third verse, stood out for me, good choice of words and great use of alliteration. one of the better verses, showing the more abstract style.
fourth verse, seemed the gangster notion was purposful - but didn`t go down well. aimed to scare but lacked good content - maybe that was the idea.
fifth verse, much the opposite of the previous - was written well and had a very nice finish. dOpe !
sixth verse, personal favourite - showed the most emotion and had a better rhyme structure. `I can’t complain, getting paid for a reworded freestyle
Meanwhile the soul of the game is taking the green mile` - pretty cool. Geddit to Audio !
goodjob
Damn this just like ressurected from death and shit .. LoL
call me jesus
kanye west is dope yo
that was so dope forsure man like sickest thing i seen pretty much
MenTiLL & The Realist. .nice verses. I liked the concept of the interview and the feeling of it as if talking to one person. But i feel like the other verses could of been easily stepped up a notch, it would of made this a solid piece, i've seen work from everyone involved and know they could of done better. but staying in context of the interview may have been some reason behind the choice of verse. thats my 2, but overall nice work and its nice to see some descent heads come together for one piece. keep it up
yo this was ill... i loved the idea it was an idea i never heard before.. with the E! true hollywood stories nice... very clever and the lyrics were sick nice job