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first verse
it connected with me becaouse i exeperinced something simmilar to those words so i kinda coupl visualise my life through it. structure was a bit err but the flow made up for it and for me it was a dope verse
second verse
this was good too. i didn'y feel it as much as the first contence wise but still brought the image out. Structure and flow same as the first. It followed well. hmm what else can i say not 2 bad ...
third verse
last verse was the most complex one of all of em. I acctualy found it a bit hard to get into it.. but the second time around it was better. Structure was very good i dunno about flow i wasnt feeling it all that much... but it was a good verse none the less...
all three of you keep doing your thing ;)
return the fev plz :)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116574
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