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This was a long ass read...but enjoyed.
The concept of this was amazing. the way you followed every line after eachother was very well done. it seemed tobe more of a poetic type piece...i felt with the imagery and topic...but you wrote on this topic beuatifully....i'll be looking at more of your pieces....keep up the good work
hit something up in my sig if you want...thanks
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it seemed tobe more of a poetic type piece
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Jus drop a link... =D
Replied to this just din't leave a link here it is..trust me all my pieces are worth tha read not a newb u knoe me i knoe u :)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116408
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Uppinizzle...!!
i suck at stories so I can't really comment, but I can say use more multies, they are grrrrrrrrrrrrreat!!!!!!!!
More Multies...
Okay...=)
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Uppin..!! =D
Liked your topic(s). Flow was good, vocab level was good. Saw a few structure things - but that's a pet peeve of mine - overall it was good. Very somber piece made for a thought-provoking work. Saw some internals scattered around which gave the rhyme scheme some complexity. Nice work overall. Agree that the reference to "Humpty Dumpty" just seemed out of place though. Hit something in my sig if you can, preferably Lamentations.
Thanx... =)
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