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This is how I saw the battle
TheUnderated/ your flow was tight, gud rhymes, nice wordplay, decent voc; your punches came thru hard with lot of creativity; you had sum nice personals in there; your structure was aight; couple of multis in your verse which were gud......
JCB/ your flow was ok, nice voc, wordplay a little off; your punches didn't came so hard as TU and they were mostly played; More personals, that's all I goota say....oh....and work on your direct punches, your structure was so-so
Overall vote/ TU (I poll this whan i hit 100+ posts, aight) Meanwhile just drop an honest vote on my battles in my sig, thx
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underrated took this one due to his flow creativity, structure and personals..... His verse wasnt played and i like that.... JCB had a nice verse but too basic and played out... not bad just elevate dawg......
vote underrated (ill poll when i reach 100)
can yall return the favor plz
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...60#post1212160
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The underrated took this easy JCB seems like he wasnt even trying, and if he was i feel soory for him, underrated butter rhymes, nothing amazing but better than jcb, decent battle
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iight..
De..
kid reminiscent of orbitals of the planets...way he revolves around a sonnin...
ask your boy kaos I got lyrical fitness .....you?... fat ass ain't even runnin...
Lol.. Made me laugh..
Thinks I'm at his level....hmmm wait aren't you that tiny dot beneath me?...
Get the Armies of China to amass at the read sea...still wouldn't defeat me....
Could of been better..
Tell you what you can have the alphabet just forfeit gimme the V Due.....
now all you spit is _erbals I left you 25 letters JBC the best you could do? ....
Haha.. Nice personal.. Wordplay.. So on..
makes sense to me..New to Rb...challenge the most slept on MC.....
Yet you couldn't couldn't elevate...get air time ..with a spot on the BBC...
[]First line sucked.. Second was iight..[/b]
Good thing you got friends in high places...quit actin like you know the Biz...
hope i know the rules..funny kids when you don't even know what a blindspit is..
Not bad..
Some nice punches.. One was quoteable.. The good one, you know.. Lol.. 6/10
Im not gona seperate his shit up for him.. Bad structure and stretched lines fucked up the flow.. You had some iight multi's.. Punches lacked.. Hmm.. Bad verse..
Get a structure going, please..
v/ De..
Vote on this.. Only one more vote needed..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117113
Thanks..
Pz..
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please hit this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119362
aight here we go....
underrated-
straight punches, you came wit more creaticity as said but your structure was wayy off.
dem- your verse was basic and had some simplistic shit in it n thats all i really saw.
booth y'all had some good shit though
peace
