Se7en VS OutCome

O ijus realsied ididnt drop the link sorri ididnt do that on purpose.......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113483
thanx alot.......

Alright upping for votes. Thanks rascal ill peep that later.

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Se7en~ you came with played lines again....nothing too creative....and more useless multis that didn't fit in as punches/metas/multis....Overall jus an ok verse....try and be more original in your rhymes....Seems like you jus threw words in there somwtimes jus so it would rhyme....

OutCome~ Stay away form sex/gay jokes as they are all mad played...Otherwise you threw somwe pretty decent personals and punches....try and shorten your lines a bit so they aren't so stretched.....metas were ok...but coulda been more creative...a good verse

Outcome wins this for a harder hitting verse...more of his punches/personals/metas landed

Please drop an honest vote here guys...it would be much appreciated http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113550

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this was a very weak battle.. seven you had some pretty basic and played out disses.. i dint see much skill in your rhyme.. you had some weak disses like that beasty boys line.. and your wordplay was seriously lacking.. try and include some more creative disses and improve your wordplay next time

outcome- your verse was weak also.. however i feel like you had some pretty ok personals i liked how you talked bout his crew and all that.. seriously your wordplay was better than sevens

vote- outcome

yo hit this battle up man its been up for a couple days now and it needs votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113409

Last up 3-0 two more folks...

Page three, godda up.

yoo outcome got this for a lot of reasons

he had better flow and structure

his punches hit harder
personals were there

and verse was good

seven had no good personals
punches were so so
flow and structure was ok

but outcome gets it for better punches and opersoanmls

v/outcome\

hit that battle up

flow-7
punches-out
creativity-out
consistancy-out
personals-out

7 u have a good flow.. but u choose weird ways to word your lines.. the first 2 bars, the way u were using the flow yo goes low shit it rhymed but it wasnt heading anywhere u know what im saying, ur flow has to say something to hit your opponent.. u had some kool disses not a bad verse, just work on intertwining the punches and the flow.. out had a somewhat simple flow at times.. but the punches and personals were there to make up for it, and also more consistancy, so he edged this match.. vote-out return an honest vote plz.. i already had one cat vote to spite me cuz i voted honest on his battle, im not saying u would but shit like makes battling not fun.. no hate or beef
this battles hot and gettin slept
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114402