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Very close battle. Underated's lines were too long. Shit looks horrible, to stretched. Underated had more hard hitting punches, and a couple multis(not much but more than AJ). AJ's was easy to read, and visualy easier to digest. Close one but punches win battles and i think underated barely edged this one out.Close battle though, fellas.Keep doin' the damn thang.
v/ The Under Rated
Peep my battle when you guys get a chance...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=107351&page=2
kool thanx for the feedback guys......still uppin this for votes...
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Damn... Alot of overruled votes got dismissed here....
Structure-AJ
Flow-pretty close
Punches-AJ
Originality-TheUnderRated
Creativity-AJ
Humor-AJ
This was pretty much a one sided battle
AJ came pretty dope.... very good verse
ALot of dope punches......................
The UnderRated... Ya flow was choppy
Your structure was screwed to hell
Punches were decent.. but need work
Vote-AJ
He simply came harder
This was a pretty good battle here...
Under: you had some good flow in there, it flowed pretty good...had some good punches....but your structure wasnt that good, even though you made up for it with the multies but still should try to shorten that down a bit.
AJ: you also had some good flow.....you had the better punches i thought....had some good personals in there that were pretty good i thought....aslo you had the better structure which helped the flow.
But overall this was a good battle, but i think AJ took it with the better punches. Props To Both.
I was in the middle of cleaning this thread last night, but I had to leave, so battle reopened @ 3-1.
Under- Ive seen better from you before I dont know what happend here. Your verse was filled with multis but no real clever punches were in there. It flowed pretty well, but it was like the punches you did throw in were not really aimed directly at him. It needed better personals too.
AJ- Your verse had some pretty clever punches in it with some nice personals too. It also seemed to flow pretty well. You stayed stong threw out the whole verse too an ended with a nice personal. Pretty good verse
OVERALL- AJ his personals an punches were more creative an were aimed on the spot.
Good battle guys
Return the favor an drop a fair vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106449
Thanks
man if you don't get the punches thats fine but i had tons of personals.....uppin this xxxxx44444 <---not an attempt to sway....one
^^Kid you had 2 personals, I had plenty more, don't sway again or I will get another mod in here.
3rd Uppin for Some Votes.
Vote - Underated.
This Battle Was Really One Sided..Underated Had The Edge In About Everything..Better Punchlines, Better Flow, And More Creativity..His Punchlines Connected Against AJ Harder Then AJ..AJ's Stuff Wasn't That Good..It Had A Pretty Good Flow And All..But The Punchlines Were Not As Hard Hitting..So Underated Just Came Out More...
Return The Favor..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108336
^^Can someone say...Herb...those are the types of votes that are removed.
4th Uppin For Good Votes.
Ehhh......Both Verses Were Kinda Weak....AJ Had Played Lines (Wind Chimes) And Some Soft Hitting Punches And UnderRated Had A Good Punch Every Three Or So Lines....And Some Of AJ's Personals Made Absolutely No Sense...Only Line Worth Mentioning...
^Funny And A Good PunchQuote:
Originally Posted by The UnderRated
my skill projects leaves this sig askin for help... guess your sig didn't honor my bomb threats..
Opener - Under
Closer - AJ
Punches - Tie (AJ Threw Weak And Under Threw A Good One Here And There)
Personals - Under (Made Sense And Were Harder)
Structure - AJ (Without A Doubt)
Vocab - Under
Flow - AJ
Vote - Under, For Having Better Punches When There Was One...No Hate To AJ But You Had Punches But Alot Of Your Shit Was Either Played Or Just Made No Sense..
Hmm...Aight battle..
Under.. ya bars were alil stretched homie... work on making them alot shorter
You had lots of multies in that shit.. so even tho ya bars was stretched.. they flow'd
Ya punches were original.. had a couple creative personals...Over aight verse
AJ..Lots of played shit... most of ya punches was played concepts(joker/comedian)
You had tha flow and structure... but under canceled those out with his wordplay
so
V/ Under
Oh well, if I lose to some certain d/r votes then it's cool, I got the style people like and believe me my lines werent played.
5th Uppin
Originality - Both.. nothin played
Punches - Both.. different style but both successful
Personals - AJ.. had more..
Flow - Underrated
Structure - Both.. easy to follow
Multis - Underrated
Meta4s - Underrated
Opener - AJ.. v.witty
Closer - AJ.. jus edged this one
VoTe = Underrated
This was helluvva close call.. both came strong with their respective styles.. felt Underrated's multis made for an ill flow an some real fresh meta4s thrown in made this an easy read.. AJ opened an closed sikk as fukk but felt a bit too much filler at points.. dont get me wrong.. verse was deep.. jus enjoyed readin Underrated's more.
Well battled fellas..
Drop a vote on this plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...24#post1111724
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...38#post1111738
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