LM vs Ja'e Roc

Flow: Tie
Punch: LM
Meta: LM
Structure: LM
Personal: LM
Enjoy: LM

Vote: LM

LM hit harder..nice structure..Jae work on punchs..youl get there

good battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106225

hit that up please...1 more vote needed

J.R. - You had an alright flow, it was consistant and didnt really seem to fall off. You had punches that had a start, but no finishing effect. Maybe work on the effectiveness of your punches. The structure was choppy, but didnt interfear with the rhyme scheme. It was an ok verse, but I dont think your punches were fully brought.

LM - You had very nice structure, and the flow was pretty good. You added some personals in there, havent seen you do that befor. You had some pretty good punches, but the others wernt as effective. The rhyme scheme was simplistic. The structure made up for that though... You also had some meta's that stood out, nice work on that...

Vote = LM

( Pretty good battle, but LM took it. Keep elevating J.R. )

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your flow were not feelin, like ya legs, in the chair u wheel,

^Best Punch of the whole battle right thurr^

So, my vote goes to Jae

Hey, can ya'll folk vote on my battle?? It's been up fa like 3 or 4 dayz or some shit.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...04#post1087304

^^Read the verses again and think bout what you just posted....I think you've got a bit tangled, that wasnt one of my lines

Actually it was me who got a bit tangled....I read your post wrong. My bad dawg. Sorry bout the freepost

ROC- you stuff was decent it seemed to flow pretty good, you had a few punches in there but nothing major an some nice vocab at times. But you gotta learn to throw punches an use meta's.

LM- You verse was pretty nice, it had alot of punches in there an personals an all that shit and was pretty creative

OVERALL- LM took this cause he had the punches

Take some time an drop a vote in my battle thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106542
Good Battle Guys

Aight battle....

LM i've seen you come way harder....
But ya personals...and punches got this
You also had better flow..and nice structure

Jae...elevate...well both of you could

so

v/LM

Return tha favor..hit this up with an honest vote..thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106705