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nah dawg LOLQuote:
Originally Posted by MUFF the Monolith
I'm not like that at all, @Notti did me dirty in our first battle
this nigga gon say "I got my verse ready"
okay, post?
"you posting anytime soon?"
me:"okay, i'll post up then" *posts*
"I'm gonna go to the store with my wife and the kids"
*blank ass look on my face*
lmao I hate that shit
yeah, it reminds me of what u and joog said about the fact that a certain tier of people can beat each other at any point in time
give any writer on here more time than somebody considered "better" and suddenly we looking at an upset
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a highly possible upset.
na nigga i said im ready when you are, you said drop it.. i said i got 6 bars done but i dont wanna finish and sit on it so im waitin for you, you dropped out the blue.. i went to store, came back and droppedQuote:
Originally Posted by OG Maestro
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me and OG for a 3rd meet in the contenders match tho, thas cool
smh this man just reworded my story
J.K Notti Rowling
Yo.
How you feeling about your 1-2, LLL positions?Quote:
Originally Posted by Notti
@OG Maestro i just dropped bro. been awhile man I'm rusty as hell
My bad for making you waitQuote:
Originally Posted by Kid Lethal
Yo. I'm going through he most right now. I mean, my life is good as fuck, but there's some stress and tension building because of smart ass people making dumb ass decisions. I'll try to work on it as soon as possible.
no sweat bro i thought i was the one who was late. no rush just giving you the heads up i got mine in
Story of my life right here;
The bars I spend time on, the ones I really think through, word them grammatically correct, etc. Get bashed.
The bars I write watching the game, grabbing some grub, stumble upon while I'm with the girl get quoted.
Like wtf
Yep..Quote:
Originally Posted by Easy.
I feel like that's the early writer's plight/text battler's plight/w.e you identify yourself as
I write these complex, creative concepts and @Notti can vouch for me
But the simple, effective, balanced bars will always win
Funny you talk about "Grammatically correct". I use to type bars in perfect grammar and I realized there's something weak about a grammatically correct verse. the syntax/tone is wack. I learned if I type the bars how most people on the coasts speak, then I'll get a better reaction. I'm East, so I think I got a favorable crowd on RB if I write some cool bars.
@Jonny Blaze lets battle 10 lines due tonight.
i can't complain.. 1-2 im 3-1 and LLL im 2-1Quote:
Originally Posted by OG Maestro
Alright, my last battle text battle for a little while
Muff.
Then I got the topical tournament.
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I didn't wanna ask/bet but can yall please stop avoiding the topical battles. ik it's not many of yall specialty but don't leave battles sitting there for months. that ain't right. support
sometimes trying to hard makes the punch come off as wack
has nothing to do w/ superbrain creativity or w.e
either the angle is wack in its inception or it doesn't resonate. point blank period pretty much
none of u are dropping bars that are too complex. n if u really think that then u need a reality check.
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- to no one in particular. js
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sometimes I might miss a tie in or something
but thn its explained to me and im like nope. still wack. lol
complexity does not = effective all the time
I'm sick af so y'all quit @'ing me to close battles n shit.
I ain't doing shit!
well wtf am I paying you for!?Quote:
Originally Posted by useless
U know this forum HAS a mod....rightQuote:
Originally Posted by OG Maestro
yeah but you're sometimes easier available since you're on like 20/7Quote:
Originally Posted by useless
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don't worry I won't tag you anymore tho lol
Quote:
Originally Posted by MUFF the Monolith
Not what I meant. I know y'all see the direction of the bar, but I force them if I think of them... Like my "A-Loomin-Notti" bar in LLL. That's just me tryna be too witty and/or putting the play over the punch. I'm not saying that you don't get the bar, I'm saying the play is typically being shoehorned into the bar. And it's my fault. That by no means is an excuse.
I would butQuote:
Originally Posted by Blanco.
^I got hiiigghhhhhh
I wasn't referring to youQuote:
Originally Posted by Easy.
no one in particular. lol aka og maestro
hahahah hhahaha im dying
coz hes always like "YO B U LIKE THE 3rd person who missed my bar b" n im like no I got it. and hes like "nigga im the davinci code of text" and im like "ok ok og ur the superbrain. u take the limitless pillz n write the bestest most complexes barz og"
I never said my bars were like stfuuuu
For 3 weeks straight, I had 3 battles where 1 bar was completely misunderstood and I was contemplating using expos in the future
das it.
and it was perfectly placed, no bad wording like some complicated bars with 1 too many concepts
Lmao.
I got a question for y'all though. Does these two lines read different flow wise?
You get your Math-off-a-bit and the Net-Sees and says you won it
Vs.
You get your Math off a bit and the net sees and says you won it.
Stfu
lol
Depends on how you choose to read them.Quote:
Originally Posted by Easy.
If you read them in normal default cadence, there's no difference
im lost. lolQuote:
Originally Posted by Easy.
a little bit I guess in the first one I say netcees as in one word.
in the second its separated so theres a slight delay I guess
The question referred to how y'all read dashes. I do dashes to indicate plays and I was wondering if I should
please tell me this ain't something you ever considered using.Quote:
Originally Posted by Easy.
already did.Quote:
Originally Posted by Notti
well you shouldn't use the dashes cuz it looks childish, sometimes you may need something, but most the time if its wording properly the reader will get itQuote:
Originally Posted by Easy.
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lmfao, what is it supposed to mean.. i feel like im looking for a subliminal message in thereQuote:
Originally Posted by OG Maestro
i dont get it either.
fucking idiots.
"please tell me you weren't considering using this."
"Already. Did"
He. Already. Did.
Shit.
we sayin we didnt get this shitty ass punchQuote:
Originally Posted by OG Maestro
yo...Math Hoffa.
math hoffa bit/math of a bit
lmao