16 lines
due by midnight
10 min to check in
no d/r
no c/v
straight up with it
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16 lines
due by midnight
10 min to check in
no d/r
no c/v
straight up with it
checkin in i'll go first you told me not to test you so i'lll go first
ight
You will neva make a hit song, yo music we will neva jam it,
You betta off battling white bitches up on black planet/
And diss the bitch above you, I dissed you, you didn’t know me
I’m king of man kind, couldn’t wrestle the game, if you were Mick Foley/
Yeah you’ll probably say what you’ll do to me; we all know it aint true,
Yo whole style couldn’t get sicker, even if it caught a new flu/
And bitch you know I aint threw, we know the game love me,
You wouldn’t make it on the band with P-Diddy season three/
And we know you aint a G, that’s why we look ova ya lines,
You like my old report cards, you will neva get signed/
That’s fuckin with ya mind, like I’m spittin some true shit,
The only thing true is this battle you want get/
Got it stuck up in ya head, now you becoming a choke artist,
We got another EMINEM, but yo future I’m gonna start it/
Knaa I’m just playin, i know you didn't believe me bitch what was you thinking,
you must be drunk, don't blame J-Quan for yo underage drinking/
lets go
are you even going to show up damn you told me to set it up now you not gonna show. waz up
i might have to change that 10 minutes to check in to no minutes as long as the verse done by midnight
this my last time postin somethin in this unless i'm uppin.
really fuck that midnight stuff unless he actually come on before midnight and drop it but if not then we can go untill he drop it. its ok he need time to think of some punch lines. i really want to see what he got he told me not to call him out or test him so i am. i'm givinghim time dammit. lol don't tell me not to call you out like i want and then don't battle i hate no shows. so when you get on put somethin down and we'll go wrom there.
thatz my itz betta to battle katz at that moment that u set it tha thread, so u don't gotta wait on no-one....lesson to be learned my dude
iight yo my fault for being so long..here it go
yo ill put a fan of him/
in a can or bin/
only thing police find is a hand and shin/
i dont care if he was fam or kin/
ya squads full of sell outs thats y we abandon them/
yo fuck P Diddy/
u only see G's wit me/
who a choke artist/
im known to smoke artist/
u dont got cash u a broke artist/
yo im gettin close to tha end/
tell this cat im for real and dont pretend/
I got gunz big enough to piss Shaq off/
so u need to back off/
before i let this mac off/
and u neva get pussy all u do is jack off....
ight my nigga its about time. ayo lets get some votes in here uppin
good luck homie...YO lets get them VOTES IN VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE
good luck with you ayo uppin ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, atleast one vote come on somebody lol.
Yall Need Votes Jooks Get This 1
He Had Mad More Punches Then Pressure Pressure Your Structure Id Good Take Out The Coma's Thats It And Your Punches Was Good To But Yo Need 2 Come Harder Fam
Jooks Had Good Good Punches And Yall Structure Was Equal Cause I Can Still Read It
Vote/jookz
lol this cat foreal. you serious, i guess whatever style floats your boat. lol uppin ..................though jookz thats one fore you my nigga.
NAH..NAH..NAH, JOOKZ AINT GOT THIS ONE......I FELT THE PRESSURE! CHECK THESE BARS OUT
yo jookz verse aint even fuckin wit those 3 bars son.....punches, flow a lil, and overall battle verse, if you cant tell then you dont need to be here, jookz verse is basically a talk shit verse instead of a battle verse, i know a battle verse, and i know how to battle, and thats not it...Quote:
Yeah you’ll probably say what you’ll do to me; we all know it aint true,
Yo whole style couldn’t get sicker, even if it caught a new flu/
And we know you aint a G, that’s why we look ova ya lines,
You like my old report cards, you will neva get signed/
Knaa I’m just playin, i know you didn't believe me bitch what was you thinking,
you must be drunk, don't blame J-Quan for yo underage drinking/
V/PRESSURE
werd up i agree wit real.. pressure's punches hit hard.. im likin the mic foley punch to.. that hit hard.. word.. v/ pressure
thanks man, I knew somebody knew a good verse when they see it especially when its betta. but hey like i said whateva floats ya boat. uppin................
uppin .................. waz up with the votes lets close this . holla atcha boy
ayo i'm out last time postin somebody vote and close this battle. i'm tired of not being able to battle othat people because of the battles that are already up.
vote close this shit out. its a few people in here if you look at this and you can vote vote.
and help close the othas out. dont ignore this
grade battle=D
vote=jooks better overall flow
just being honest
pressure nice flow but It's like kid and play you now
jooks work on your punchlines
what lol. you serious, lol pfff can't be serious, i fell ya though lol this is seriously funny, u got to be joking about his flow being better than minz lol you wild for that. but igh tlike i said whateva floats your boat, lol thas ass. lol. this is funny even white people in the computer lab laughin at this shit. and they dont know me. lol. ight
finish this battle. lol
jook got this one hands down... better punches and wordflow.. but yo. can yall help me close my battles since i helped with this one? thanks.
ight ight jookz thats 3-2 lol
i know its someone who feel my verse lol
damn. lol
uppin for votes.
yo thanxs for tha votes peeps..PRESSURE dont hate on my flow LOL..yeah ima work on my punchlines...Keep voting...........1
ayo uppin ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,lets close this battle
AY! lets close this battle please...get them votes in iight.1
yo come on peeps..vote this is not tha best battle but its worthwhile to vote for some1
well ya know.....just vote fairly on dis battle as I have done here...thnx
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yo yall need to VVVVVVVVOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEE....1
lets close this shit i know some of u people like my flow and shit juss vote its not that hard.......1
Vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvooooooooooooooottttttttttttteeeeee eeee
Damn Jookz Yall Need 2 Close This Battle
man im tryin to get people to vote..but they being A$$ holes..lol juss playin..but vote PLZZ
ayo close this battle my niggaz and niggets,,,,,,,
Vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvoooooooooooooooootttttttttttttteeee eeeeeeeee
do yall really not like this battle that much to where yall don't want to vote.
lets close this
yeah man come on ppl juss read tha raps and vote for tha best its not that hard
yo come on we need to close this battle................
yo come on we need to close this battle...........
yo come on we need to close this quickly..........
yo pressure took this one he had hard punches and good stucture
vote pressure
lets close this battle ight, only two more for each of us who got it let me hear ya.
vote.