Nightmares

I keep having these nightmares...

I stand in a shadow, placid… and stare at the hallowed fabric
Mindful as those before me with care as to how they’d craft it
…I glare in panic, its stops waving … barely brandished
The colors bleed, a hundred seething maggots snatch it
…Stars and stripes, scarred and partially igniting…
I start to cry as they tarnish the father’s writings
when from the dark of night they emerge from their spots of hiding
“The Bill of Rights will be killed tonight,” one delighted
I recover from the sight and remind them who crashed the towers
…Focused in a zone of sin, Pelosi grins, “I have the power!”
My hopeless limbs are frozen stiff and trapped for hours
The psychopaths’ empowered … Clinton’s fascists crown her
I try to smash the coward who chained me against this pentagram
Uncle Sam’s beside me, in pain from the same demented plan
…now enters a man with a weapon in hand…
I ask why he helped Bin Laden and practically held his hand

…demanding I tell the man, “many times, you had the chance”
His rhetoric is deadened with the sound of shattered glass
Now a crash, out of last effort I let my valor flash
Breaking out I dash … to the ground where Howard stands
“Byaaaaahhhhh”
…They level Lady Liberty, she promptly cracks and bows
The same way liberated Iraqis took Saddam’s statue down
I’m shackled now, again … rotting and getting older
The guard just stands and watches with Monica on his shoulder
…comments are coming over, pollster sits with a grimace
“Let’s go with Hussein Obama, use his skin as gimmick”
“Opponents will cite the cigarettes, they’ll hit his addiction”
“Get him patches, it’ll help us in our bid if he quits it”
Instantly this is finished as the vision pans and grows
…Democratic Senator Byrd in his Klansmen robe…
Overthrows the discussion with a flustered approach
“N-O, that’s no.” Trust me it doesn’t slow.

My location changes but still I remain enchained in
…painful chains and … the hazy state my brains in
Awaken in a bed, letters blazoned on the wall…
“Welcome to the clinic, come one…come all!”
In it a ‘patient’s’ shaking … they drill, I begin praying
A lady’s saying blatantly, “We’ll kill your children safely.”
Suddenly, the floor is torn asunder, still they brace me
A mega stadium filled with over forty million babies
…They grow before my eyes, in turn I’m in awe…
I see musicians, physicians, leaders, attorneys at law
Americans settled in niches, different, learning yet flawed
…as any normal human is … yearning to claw
to the top but they stop sharply, abruptly and pause
a swarm inserts blades into their skulls and their jaws
Battalions of abortionists, its what they were taught
Slowly the people burn… not as wanted as they thought

They aren’t alone, they go with accidentally killed mothers
There goes a scared soul …Just another number
“Don’t impose your views on us!! All will be deceased!
We have a CHOICE to murder let us slaughter them in peace…”
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That’s when the scene ceases and I seem to leave my feet again
Hover above, soldiers in a field and so I scream to them
Each of them, how appreciative and indebted deep I am
…then I watch helplessly as a demon descends…
Leaving a red, fog on the field, cold and severe
Suddenly the guns that they were holding disappear
This is clear and apparent as attackers quickly trample them
The troops are left defenseless, no chance they have to handle them

…A nation falls … desperation crosses borders
and finally the evil manifests its hatred for us…
…I’m back now, watching the flag and how its changed
This time more of a mourning … looking down at its remains.

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Written on the birthday of Ronald Wilson Reagan. Also dedicated to him.

You're just posting everywhere now huh..?

Anyway good piece. Mad long, but maintained interest throughout. I can definetly say that storytelling/imagery is your strongest point and is going to help you in a lot of leagues. You're very detailed also. One day that might even hurt you in a odd way. Nevertheless, the story progressed ever so fluently and so did the content. I liked how it pertained to the government (i.e issues that we've been facing over a course of history). Shows that you're up on your stuff. Overall, good piece.

Hi Nique. Thanks for the feedback.

Another well written piece. Are you an alias? One name comes to mind who has the exact same style as you. If it is, then welcome back. This shit was dope man. Well done.

No I'm not an alias. Who did you have in mind tho, if you dont mind my asking?

man you dope i hope you keep writing we are really differeent you have really good imagery made me feel like i was watching ehat was happening through the story line plus this was longer than most so it was good to see such consisitancy with the imagry aspect your doep at telling the actual story too which goes over big with voters

no real biggys that were bad so keep elevatin and writing

hit this up'

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=325549

Props on the feed.

never took the time to stop and read this, but the imagery was incredible, this little piece of the nightmare had me stirrin

I stand in a shadow, placid… and stare at the hallowed fabric
Mindful as those before me with care as to how they’d craft it
…I glare in panic, its stops waving … barely brandished
The colors bleed, a hundred seething maggots snatch it
…Stars and stripes, scarred and partially igniting…
I start to cry as they tarnish the father’s writings
when from the dark of night they emerge from their spots of hiding

a really unique rhyme skeme, i liked it alot tho, it kept on flow and the internal multis just added onto the imagery it seemed, the emotional i think could have been just a bit more indepth, but i was feeling the overall message about politics and how fucked up some of the things they do are. the descriptions in here were nice in a story line. i was feelin this piece, keep em droppin

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=324934
when ever you can get to it

yep thanks

Upping this right quick.

Yo this shit was dope, I can't say I agree with the views presented in the peice but I gotta give credit where credit is due. This shit is mad nice, nicer than anything else I could write and the rhyme scheme was very consistent and the vocabulary was plain so it keep me interested throughout the peice. Very nice dawg, only I would have shortened it if I were you but thats just me cause I don't like reading long posts but yours works better than others.

cool bro, thanks for the feed

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