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since the day when we were walkin i couldnt even believe my eyes
remeniscine of the times; talkin of the passes of our lifes
see back at the times it was just a scene i sent to see
i feel it inside; of our dreams are meant to be
of wat u givin me missin your lovin,huggin, n your kissin
every word that u spoken got me hooked cuz u im missin
every night its you im thinkin wishin u by my side
your my one n only; never the lonely thats on my mind
all the time in this world together in any wheather
lovin u rain or shine no matter where; when ever
every year from every second; january to december
those signs you sendin, inventin, tendin; i remember
forever deep'n my heart;im keepin u right from the start
together it was harsh when we were no longer apart
look now; better days we were crazy
your my lady; things have changed; you amaze me
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ill post the links here ill edit them in
ill go grab em now
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this wasa nic epiece and fist things first welcome to the site and dont be afraid ofany hate cus this site is full of hate. but your scheme you used was nice and i liked how you cut form time to time and the flow was onpoint it was somewhat fast then slow then fast then slow and it was cool short but sweet nah mean you did a nice job in this now just broaden a bit more on your vocab and use more wording apprehhences nah mean read around and grab some swag not jack there swag but get the concept of it and somewhat use it to your own ways!..
nice drop!
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