Battle of the Sexes Feat. Mansin

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Mazerka - Comic Sans
Mansin - Arial


A species defined divine - With ego's equal to gods
We highlight our triumphs and leave our flaws in the dark

They take our fortunes and labors...'Cause we torture and rape 'em
Force abortions they pay for, that of course we persuaded
Then in courts we don't claim kids...We just call 'em regrets
If we gave women a rib...Why can't we give 'em respect ?
Subjectin' neglect to others-Aimin for highs from the gutters
Fallen in alcohol we ball and blame all our faults on another
We divorce and accuse - Ignorin' the source and the Truth
By not admittin' it's our fault...We're pourin' salt in our wounds
Never shuttin' 'cause stubborn grudges - We act like a child
"Well if she won't apologize....BELIEVE ME neither will I ! "
Makin' leaders - Dozens of mothers struggle for checks
Comin' monthly......Then resort to proffesions in sex
Then we forged professions to vex - Prostitutes left within debt
Stockin' pockets - Constitute poverty...Yet no impression is left
Lessons are set, for kids - Don't hit women we try to enforce
Then adverse to our message - We hurt 'em passin' the torch
Assassains of sorts - We rip apart hearts rechartin' the course
Of brothers - Smotherin' passions, laughin' - Lackin' remorse
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Adams apples in stores - battle of the sex at its core
Ample samples galore - Eve ill on the secular stall
Pushing buttons of sorts - boiled blood potentially drawn
Bottled up being stored - spilling milk intentional war
Stirring pots with a thorn - in my side emotional torn
While the novelties worn - Negative and positive force
Equality tell me its freedom?………… or are we actually bored
Tackle practical thoughts - repetitive these actual chords
Watching opposites drawn - attracted by less factual whores
like whats happening yall - drama bring it back to the board
Man Im battling hordes - check it I just captured a pawn
But shes packing a sword - know this shit is accurate yall
Being right is that important?………… when ya sacks get ignored
Take a tactical course “its crazy” but fuck jacking it off
Worth the hassle of course - certainly beats stacking the porn
And im asking you pause - feminine and masculine wars
The truth is
Beef is fattening……..Veges is better for all

Mansin's Links

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=319737
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=319768

My Links

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=318684&page=2
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?f=5

We'll edit if needed.

rize

Ite im liking the whole concept of this,Starys from what calling woman bitches and that so i like it cause its diffren i suppose.

The flow was coo too,The whole pice was very truthful and eveythink seemed to rhyme and stay on topic. A nice piece overall and liked it alot

Then in courts we don't claim kids...We just call 'em regrets
If we gave women a rib...Why can't we give 'em respect ?

That rhyme there was hot,gotta be my stand up lyric from this piece here!

stay up.

Arise my hunger stricken, bottom dwelling topic.

Nice to see something different with some substance to it. Almost on a Tu-pac tip promotin the women, hence the word WOMEN... a little extra work you could put that into a hit audio track.

Looking for some good feed here.

WILL RTF ON ANY LINK LEFT.

(Unless you are of the many who are supposed to feed this, meaning I've fed something of yours..)

They take our fortunes and labors...'Cause we torture and rape 'em
Force abortions they pay for, that of course we persuaded

We divorce and accuse - Ignorin' the source and the Truth
By not admittin' it's our fault...We're pourin' salt in our wounds

^Nice.

Good way to open your verse, Even though at times I felt it fell off towards the end.



Equality tell me its freedom?………… or are we actually bored
Tackle practical thoughts - repetitive these actual chords
Watching opposites drawn - attracted by less factual whores
like whats happening yall - drama bring it back to the board


^Good

Same for you, Wasn't really feelin most parts cuz there was to much off rhyming. It had its ups and downs.

But overall this was a good read, Keep it up.

Thanks for the feed. Uppin'.

I liked this. I'm feeling the first stanza a lot more than the second stanza though, but this was cool. You both incorporated each other styles together really well. Flow was cool throughout and I liked the message you portrayed. Real talk about women. Nice to see males addressing an issue like this. Good stuff.

The Wording was alright and flow was constant which is good. The Emotion was very deep, Creativty was strong. The Imagenation was very creativr and wel done. Liked both verse alot. You both did well, but I wish to see better peices in the future with elevation. Keep it up.

~Belligerant

PS: RTF on one of my DOPE collabs.

This piece was really unique. and also very emotional.

Marzerka- I like the rhyme skeme alot, it fit perfectly in your smooth flow, and also the structure was crystal clear, nice use words .. good science

Mansin- Your flow was okay, but the way you set up the structure it was bit annoying wit (-) in every line, but i was mos def getting the message, also showed some okay emotion. Also it wasn't a story everything was in a present tense

keep droping science

Feed is much appreciated. Uppin'.

I'll hit a link when I get a chance.

Uppin'.

Both spits were good and lyrical content good also. Kinda ish like "Keep your head up" type na mean...good to see this issue being addressed it seems much more real than half the love om's i'v seen and i'v seen a lot na mean. Basically meaning i prefer an issue in whihc the writer looks at his own sides action objectively and thus incorporating that outlook into an om was good. PErsonally, i found both writers to bring a good blend into the topic and theres nothing too harsh to say really. Kepp at it and stay up^.