Leave Mics Torn

I leave mics torn, that’s my ticket to wealth
got so many lyrics, my book of rhymes don’t fit on the shelf
I’m sick of myself…… I ain’t laughing either,
son I got a rapping fever that conflicts with my health
Any union that’s assuming they’re hotter, I’m refusing to honor
pursuing the drama, by moving like a crew of piranhas
Leaving mind states consuming the trauma…….
after, bodies I’m bruising after using as a human pinyota
To beat me, you won’t have ya hope fulfilled
only ‘close calls’ you’ll see will fall under ya local bill
So don’t attempt to show ya skills, my flow is ill
I’d shove electric tools in ya brain just so you ‘know the drill’
So just chill, hope you wrote ya will, cuz I’m in a mode to kill
leaving microphones steaming like a smoking grill
throughout urban districts….
my verbal sickness got rappers ‘scared to talk’ like a murder witness

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peace

come on peeeps upppin some damn feedback

peace

multis were ok.
imagery wasn't there.
wordplay was aiight.
vocab was average.
nice bar's between though.
Self - Glory is the worst type of topical to do !
so I'd say that this wasn't a real good job at attempting that...

decent multiples
some were strected too far
good flow tho
i didnt get any imagry
i do alot of self glory topicals too though
writers block is a bitch
keep up
Drop some feed on mine

Pretty ill for 15. The flow was off in some places... and a couple corny lines... but otherwise pretty good. It comes with time... lots and lots of time lol. But keep practicing and elevating. I could see some truth coming from you.
Split.



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