With Rap, Comes Blood. Brix ft Nique

Brix

With rap, comes blood.. & strung love, with no guidance or relevance
Money in the hood kills the good, who become the midise of neglegance
Go'n' look, the doors made of wood - so don't blow a light in the entrance
Opportunities endangered us, when strangers take a bite at a reference..
Which rappers never write or mention, yet it continually fuels tension
Until "boiling over" becomes just another fucking homicidal lesson
Suicidal aggression plays a big part in aiding, & degrading reputation
Still.. you think its worth while, when green bills have no limitation
& you STILL think your "ice" pile, warrants more than immitation
You're wrong..
..in all relations, then you'll revert to a bunch of classics just to rape'em.
See when your material vapours, apt to venereal capers, & drugs hurt
You'll realise later, maybe too late.. that actually none of them work
Looking for your jus' deserts is fine, it'll hit you at the worst time
Number 1, down to 53rd..
& I'm still punching myself in my mind, that a guy like you were ever mine.
You didn't just fall outta line, or advert to custodial crime..
You inspired millions of children, just to let that inspiration die.
So I guess I'm the con of this rhyme, as there's nothing left to teach me
Life ain't peachy, now watch your legacy die with rain-washed graffiti
As for your LP's and Cd'S, and all the ticket stubs I feel I didn't see
Have been thrown out freely with the rest of my memories.

The inspiration, ripped the latter away.

Nique

The call is over, we write for this spot
Fallen soldiers turned Jesus Christ's of Hip Hop
And we're the lines to its plot, a thugs shrine to the blueprint
Not finding solutions to these blood lines in the movement
From the time that we're students. It's unpleasantly hard,
When lessons' are scarred from taking your message too far
It's getting hectic by far with the dummies involved
In God We Trust? But we shouldn't trust money at all
It ain't funny at all. There's bullshit in all evil
With guns god-like. .cause a bullet loves all people
This drug is lethal, but I guess we've slept through the curse
Every death is a birth. .we accept and crept through the worst
But I'm expecting a search under the rawkus and smug
For our pride and dignity brushed under carpets and rugs
Try to go farther with love. And seeking for more,
Of a line or a song for LIFE ...and even the score
Relieving the gore, the hatred, the submissive extent
Where malicious intent is thought out from fictitous events
So with this pen I vent when it's sad and rough
And learn to live with the fact that with rap, comes blood

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=295351

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=294510

Wow @ the sleep thats going on here. Let me get this shit started.

Brix -

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Go'n' look, the doors made of wood - so don't blow a light in the entrance
Opportunities endangered us, when strangers take a bite at a reference..
Which rappers never write or mention, yet it continually fuels tension
Until "boiling over" becomes just another fucking homicidal lesson
Suicidal aggression plays a big part in aiding, & degrading reputation
Still.. you think its worth while, when green bills have no limitation

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I loved these lines man, I loved your verse. You mentioned the rappers' idiocy in both subliminal and obvious manners, and I enjoyed the subliminal parts a lot better. Your part had extra amounts of vocabulary, but they were easy to understand which is always a good part in a piece. "You think its worth while, when green bills have no limitation". This line was so dope because its so true, and for some reason, mainstream rappers have no idea that the greed and rich lives they live will near its end, by being so called, "gangstas". Great read.

Nique -

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This drug is lethal, but I guess we've slept through the curse
Every death is a birth. .we accept and crept through the worst
But I'm expecting a search under the rawkus and smug
For our pride and dignity brushed under carpets and rugs
Try to go farther with love. And seeking for more,
Of a line or a song for LIFE ...and even the score
Relieving the gore, the hatred, the submissive extent
Where malicious intent is thought out from fictitous events

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Well "Gaping Asshole" lol, you've done a mighty fine job here. Your multies and inners were so full of content, and there was no boring part of your piece in it. "Relieving the gore, the hated, the submissive extent, Where malicious intent is thought out from fictitous events", was close to the most truthful line that I've seen in so long, and the topic you're writing to is very informative itself. I love your skill and the pieces that you drop, both of you. Great read people, keep going.

If both of you have time, please check the link in my sig, piece.

"Gaping Asshole hahaha"

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thx4thereply

Brixton
- I, like the other dude who feed, enjoyed how you used both obvious and subliminal styles in your verse. Although the subliminal parts came across as more creative to me, I really liked how the below statement was more blatent.

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You didn't just fall outta line, or advert to custodial crime..
You inspired millions of children, just to let that inspiration die.

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^ Very true in my opinion. I liked how you stressed your points, some of the language you used was very persuasive. I thoroughly enjoyed your verse.

Nique
- I really liked the wordplay you used. Very creative, and really held my interest to what you were writing.

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It ain't funny at all. There's bullshit in all evil
With guns god-like. .cause a bullet loves all people
This drug is lethal, but I guess we've slept through the curse
Every death is a birth. .we accept and crept through the worst

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^ The 'guns god-like' line was great... that had me like wow! Your use of internal rhymes, and multi's, was incredible & flawless. Enjoyed your verse just as much.

The only thing I could look to critique from this was that the subject content isn't very original... I have seen this written on before. It's not like that detracted from my enjoyment of the drop, so it's probably irrelevant me stating it lol. I felt you both incorporated different styles... that being said the two verses were moulded well and didn't seem disjointed at all. I really enjoyed this. Great work, and keep it up!

Uppety..

Damn, I really liked thise alot. My favorite part about it is that it's a perfect example for all those kids who write like 50 Cent and say I dislike it simply because I don't understand.... No, I don't like it because its not creative, but this, this is gangstah rap with intelligense and that is very refreshing. I really didn't have a favorite verse in these because you both took different approaches and used completely different styles... Which was nice. The contrasts worked very well with eachother. Both very strong flows. Brix, I loved how everytime I was just about to lose the flow on yours, I get hit with a series of multies and it would just feel amazing because that kept up a level on unpredictability. Nique, your opening line was fucking amazing. I really want to hear that on beat because I just hit that in my head on a very soft beat right before the drums kick in for the rest of the verse and it just feels so momentous. Overall, great job I really enjoyed this reed.

I'd apreciate it if you could return the favor:
As Seen on Tv!
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=295345

Rhymes like this are going to revolutionize the music industry. It's cool to see new creativity in truth through use of your brain.

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See when your material vapours, apt to venereal capers, & drugs hurt
You'll realise later, maybe too late.. that actually none of them work

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I like this line, very nice put...

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It's getting hectic by far with the dummies involved
In God We Trust? But we shouldn't trust money at all

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Yeah, preach that to the world.

Brix... my nigga... word... fuck it... word...



and Quill... I'm a fan. Know that. no game... nothing... all seriousness... this is me at 2 am... talkin on the phone serious...

Lol, thanks Brandon.

Brix-

Wow nice, you definitely with you drop brought good points
across in a unique way as well.

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Opportunities endangered us, when strangers take a bite at a reference..
Which rappers never write or mention, yet it continually fuels tension"

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Omg yes very true ignorant as well for people to due
so. Great point you brought across here. and with a nice
flow even though to some readers it shouldn't matter to me
it does. Because bringing up an issue like this with a flow
is like a bueatiful work of art like you did.

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With rap, comes blood.. & strung love, with no guidance or relevance
Money in the hood kills the good, who become the midise of neglegance"

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Just too dope by far my favorite line. Made perfect sense,
and you brought another strong point across. Especially
the part I put in bold letters..

Nice.


Nique-

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Not finding solutions to these blood lines in the movement
From the time that we're students. It's unpleasantly hard,
When lessons' are scarred from taking your message too far
It's getting hectic by far with the dummies involved
In God We Trust? But we shouldn't trust money at all
It ain't funny at all. There's bullshit in all evil
With guns god-like. .cause a bullet loves all people
This drug is lethal, but I guess we've slept through the curse
Every death is a birth. .

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Ok these lines were honestly fire. I'm hot lmao..
Nice nice unqiue style here the way you made
you point with a style of writing that's hard to do.
Your word scheme and stuff very well executed.

The lines I put in bolded letters was what struck me
the hardest. Nicely done Nique.



If this piece has not been nominated I will due
so hecks yes lol.

dope collab man I wasn't bored!