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S.O.S ( Sick Of Society)
Why should I become trusting and God-loving
Social acquisitions positions religions of nothing
The only person who made me was my mom
If she weren't horny where would I come/cum from
I visualize societies historical decision's errors
A "war on terror" dont make my visions clearer
As homogenous structures eruptures prejudice
Crumbles the edges promotes anger's syllabus
Im an affiliate of truth and spoken word's validity
But why do people have to struggle politically
Trash on streets as cities glorified in pamphlets
Sounds to me the horror of Jews in Auschwitz
Every city got a troubled area of crime rates
Leavin people like primates to annihilate
Ignorant people sit around and dismiss facts
As failure rises ya prejudice is what attracts
......I write an S.O.S in the ground you see
But what comes to me is that Im Sick Of Society
......I write an S.O.S in the ground you see
But what comes to me is that Im Sick Of Society
We heard many stories and fables as morals
Then we grow and come up with stupid quarrels
Life seems to be a 2 sided coin with no balance
With love by the drips we pour hatred by gallons
The lower, middle, and the upper class structure
One suppresses the other as the last one suffers
A government been made to destroy the individual
Whats visible is politicians ignore their principles
Shame on them for selling out to corrupted officials
Yet the "good" you say has never even been little
Its been in milliliters as they just lay in leisure
Claiming they're bi-partisan and strong leaders
I don't understand how we fall into a mess
Success dont come overnight for us to access
......I write an S.O.S in the ground you see
But what comes to me is that Im Sick Of Society
......I write an S.O.S in the ground you see
But what comes to me is that Im Sick Of Society
Gun shots, distribution of illegal drugs transfer
The truth hidden when we dont get a full answer
What disturbs me is people dont care to learn
Just party, no attention as awareness adjourns
Thats how their lives get affected subliminally
Depression sets as the party releases energy
The path in life has many ways so dont worry
Don't get stuck in situations or you see the jury
But the statistics that exist reminisces hell
When ya got companies' prejudice that sells
I walk in a bathroom and vomit in the toilet
Spells out all the hatred,but we cant avoid it
I'm creepin on the floor like zombies in graves
I'm pickin cotton like whites did to the slaves
I'm stripped naked shot and buried by Nazis
I'm ethnically cleansed by Columbus' armies
I'm a man living in enemy territory tiredly
.......I'm a man that is sick of society
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I really feel political pieces...i enjoy politics, therefor i like to see how ppl portray happenings in our world. I hate when people do not know what they are talking about, and are just bitching...and you definetly DID NOT do that here, i was feeling your verse from start to finish...also felt the quick chorus's....this flowd amazingly well, and you had wordplay just overloadin the lines, which made me wanna put it on a beat (and i dont even do audio lol)....your lines got me thinkin,and questing my own beliefs on certain things, which i appreciate greatly..i love pieces that can do that....i did a piece similiar to this....however i dont recall reading much of your work..but im glad i hit this up...cuz its probably one of my favorite political pieces ive ever read here in om..not to mention the fact that it was written with e/thing a good piece needs from flow-vocab!
keep up the great work
(thank you for hittin up my piece aswell)
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nice piece i also like political pieces, wordplay was tight had me thinking alot well i can't touch on anything new that spekz didn't say so yah
hit my om
forbidden desire
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yeah i was feeling this piece nice way to express
you feeling nice word play tour flow was on point
this was enjoyable to read 8/10
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This was a real nice drop. very political and word'd with great essence and definition. it went str8 to the point and hit hard on TARGET!. i liked your emotion and vocab. your multies was a great asset to your delivery!
keep it up homes.
RTF on yhe OM in link called GONE!
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This Was A Dope Piece, Political Issues Can Be Boring But You Made THis An Interesting Piece. Nice Delivery Of Mulits And Vocab, The Flo Was On Point.
The Lil Chourus Was Also Dope, Im Gratefull You Didnt Oberload This Piece With Too Much WordPlay As It Tends To Be A Bit Noobish In My Eyes,
Excellent Read Cuz...9-10
Keep It Up.
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yo nice fucking flow yo f;sho..........multies was banging yo.........vocab rolled well....
emotion roared aloud........i felt the multies could of been continued further still tho coz u had some but they werent chock-a-block as it went on .........yeah was an action packed read . could of had a bit more metaphorical content in my opinion. but all in all a solid rap...
check out my latest 1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=291425
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