Originally Posted by Bo6vious
wow, how the fuck are you complex in your rhymes and post in my thread
"LMAO .,..hahahahahhahahahaha.,, me was thinkin dat too"
^maybe you didnt get the reason he said that, i didnt post anything and left it blank...thats why cats started acting up
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anyways, mine as well leave feed, i think you were concintrating too hard on the vocab which was great dont get me wrong, but the flow was choppy at times, and there was clever but not "clever" just speech. i expect some similies and connections that make your eyes rise. i didnt get a poetic sence off this at all either, i feel like you were solely concintrating on the wording and forgot where your heart in the om was, no hate i was really feelin it, i just think you, yourself could use work on other aspects beside vocab