Sick & Twisted

Flipping the fuck out, lock & load a 12 gauge on you
Measure a red dot dot on you
I'm so sick of you, thats why I'm gonna stick you
Dispicable & unthinkable
Placing a group of friends in body bags, the connection is unlinkable
Nothing like the fresh smell of rotting corpses in the morning
Mr.Neighbor please dont say shit, I'll go off without a warning
Brushing my teeth with ya daughter's arm bone
Dont assume I'm not harmful
Especially when I'm scrubbing da floor wit her bloody silicon tit
Shit, wut u gonna do prick?
I'm quick to slit so dont start up any conflict
I'll stomp you out like a fucking mosh pit
Sipping on fresh blood like vampiers
My dick wont reattach, damn pliers
Slap you around with it like a dildo
Waters unnatural cuz I build da flow
To wipe out you stuck up queers
Creep up behind and pop two in the dome
While your butt fucking some unknown deers

Hook 4x
Sick and twisted mind of a V.I.G
Pop off & have ya relatives repeating R.I.P

My fuckin brain's washed, cant you see the shine?
Crack you in ya bitch jaw just 2 watch ya fall back like incline
My raps are hereby nazi certifed
Perscuting any motherfucker trying to stop my ride
But ya cant my ride and ya cant stop this rhyme
Cuz the rhymes mutates and mutilates
Ripping your fuckin head off, send ya low class to the gates
Nobody can put me to death cuz they'll always smell this morbid breath
Gaved ya the chance to walk away, should've left
Lying helpless trying to escape the coffin 6 feet under
With no body movement cuz I got arms & legs in a meat grinder
And the torso being served as a holiday turkey at a broken down diner
Soaked up the blood with Martha Stewarts decorative tampons
Broken teeth used for ass picks
All I wanna fuck is ass chicks
With a butcher knife stapped to my dick
Bitch thinkin she on her a period cuz I'm slicing the clit
At the end put icing on the clit
Make her body turn pale and cold
Horror is the greatest story untold

Hook 4x
Sick and twisted mind of a V.I.G
Pop off & have ya relatives repeating R.I.P


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i thought that this was an okay piece. topic is pretty common and i dont think you brought anything new to it. you need to stand out from the norm if your gonna make a piece thats a common topic. better use of vocab and better wordplay as example would improve it.

keep writing.

Thanks, I appreciate the feedback!

This Was A Good Piece Weak Vocab But Other Than That It Was Decent Nothin Spectacular But Still Good

Can You Leave Feed On The OM In My Sig

This drop was iight.Ya vocab was good.I'd give it a 6/10