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    Fresh Rap

    In the United States they say that there is freedom everywhere you look
    But that’s just a lie cuz all the government people are just crooks
    Am good at this rap game
    And there is no one to blame
    I will throw it to metaphorically just cuz it’s off the dome
    You may think it’s a fuckin poem
    Now there is a lot of shit going on in my life
    What the fuck I ain’t ready to have a wife
    My homie switch has a new chick and things are going good
    But people try to break them down but I’m the strongest cuz am from the hood
    Am sucking up for them cuz they’re so happy together
    Am happy that they are together
    Cuz I have knew him for at least two year’s and he is really care’s for her
    I can see it in his eyes and I can see it in her
    But fuck this family shit everyone talking shit
    I don’t start any shit, there won’t be any shit
    Yeah so what if I took that from the youngbloodz
    Am from northside but am not with the bloods
    If there is freedom everywhere you look
    Why is the government filled with crooks
    Why is there always fighting and the hood’s
    And the school system no good
    What is the fuck wrong being a thug
    Most of the thugs are not thugs be choice it‘s how they are placed
    And don’t sell my shit that is laced
    Why is everyone using drugs I will tell you why
    Most drug users are teen’s so that way they can get raid off there problems
    So that’s why they use drugs
    :realist:
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    lady_Desiree
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    once ain it seems like your just posting all types of shit i see that yu seriosuly need to elevate because this was weak right here and teh title doesnt give off any type of view of what poeople will be reading when they click this shit to read.. the shit has to be something everybody would take interest in with fully or in slight ways

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    You had nice concept to complement your flow. Your rhymes were on point but everything was too basic. You completley ignored the creative aspect as in punches, wordplay, metaphors etc.
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    Closed. Proper title next time.

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