One of the first things i wrote

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January 28th, 2006, 07:24 PM
Gurbil

One of the first things i wrote

This is one of the first things i wrote so keep that on mind.

yo did u no i hit mans with a base ball bat .
ye i went upto him and went baseball u twat.Crack.
Next thing i know mans down cus i hit him over his crown.Thenb a week on i was gettin sued i also had a message in the mail what sed that my marriage has failed.So im thinkin does this mean my love boat is sikin.Fuk it jus get another drink in.So saturday night i was on the prowl i saw her she was at the bar she sed she wudnt mind avin a ride in my car so i sed ive lost my number can i have yours and replied that one deserves a round of applause#

Im sorry for ever bein thayt wak please dont b too criticising

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...56#post3875256

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=268218
January 28th, 2006, 09:38 PM
J.Christ

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so i sed ive lost my number can i have yours and replied that one deserves a round of applause

You UK muhfuccas dont use this line ..
lol

Shit was weak he knows it but im gone rate it
Pretty good if it was over an audio? MAYBE !!

Jus didnt get that line

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yo did u no i hit mans with a base ball bat .
ye i went upto him and went baseball u twat.Crack.

Threw me all off .. explain and keep it up Gurbil . fa sho
January 29th, 2006, 02:05 PM
Supremacy

wack as fuck
worse thn my first thing i wrote (ppl knockin at my door, smokin crack, ima sneak out the back, cos i dont give a fuck no more)
y r u postin it if u kno its wack

wen u got upto 100posts, can u vote on tha battle in my sig
January 31st, 2006, 06:07 AM
Baron Mynd

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Originally Posted by Supremacy

wen u got upto 100posts, can u vote on tha battle in my sig

Now THATS wack as fuck. Begging kids to vote on your piece of shit battles.
The 'baseball bat' lines seemed more grime-flow sounding, the americans dont have that there. Its an underground UK sound, so you cant blame them for not picking up on that. I did. I found a basic flow there, could imagine you freeing this, it wasnt all that great content wise - but it was one of your first attempts, so I cant fault you on that. Props on the "Ive lost my number, can I have yours?" line though, its nice to see heads injecting a bit of humour into their drops. Everything on here just lately is on the serious tip.

Keep at it Nig!
January 31st, 2006, 07:43 AM
Johnny 6-feet

16 lines minimum and needs a proper title. Closed.