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the holy
contemption flow from the thoughts kept hidden/
wilding between the layers where normality is living/
i hope that i can rationalize the plan that flashed a lightspeed/
making all moves that made true with a a hint of light greed/
the perspective spit over bars at 95 bpm's/
out there like a player's coach, wanna see them win/
mind burned at both ends, all laid on the line/
i'm blood sweat and teared out, so i'm paid on the time/
interjection of heavy touring around the possiblities/
sway my demeaner from joy to instant hostility/
and on top of that monotomy hawkin' me, watchin me/
follow me till the death of a dream walking me/
the battle continue strained thru vocal cord sinew/
trying to recieve blessings like baptist church venues/
my rapbooks the gospel....bubling with the holy/
controlled from outernature, no one can hold me/
chorus
blessed is those who believe in me
deceiving thee the end will be relief in me
the shadow failure never touch the wisdom
i stand omnipotent throught my vocal prism
clutching with the viens raging for the moment/
ill manipulation concocking demising in torrents/
the fire drives hot lines burning etchings of defeat/
and signs of weak feeble minded scatter the streets/
wood shatters splinter injure with no malice/
outsiders awe struck from vocabulary's golden chalis/
smashin glass palaces down to the infrastucture/
i stand with a mic at armegeddon's interjuncture/
ready to ride the current transmuting into energy/
a/r scars battle and bite but leaves no injury/
at my nexxus.... i perplex minds into infantsy/
laying catastrophe and disaster into mastery/
elements change producing juices of success/
the holy annointment proficided, unknown with an x/
with peace i stand..... platnium a million fold/
through the age of time i'll outlast my soul/
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this was alirght
ok vocab ect.
prolly be better if it was audio
but ya overall elevate
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Overall Feed
it was ok could have been alot better the topic i didnt feel went with the actual lyrics
feed on structer
it was great
feed on vocab
it was ok not the best but at least you had some
feed on word play
this was a weak point well i felt it was
overall rateing
6/10
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i agree wit the dickhead above me it needs alot of help homie
7/10
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