Y'all Niggas

This is The Heart of THe FLats

Yall niggas cant fuck wit me,
run up on me at the light get a buck fifty
aint no way you be buck -in me
aint no way niggas is fu- ckin me
I got more then 10 connects but i stick with the mob
The I- tal-ians got the best rock
On Broad Way all day, we move the jars
Downtown the mblood nioggas got the newest cars

( Hook)

Y'all niggas is Craaaazy
Y'all niggas is Baaaaabies
Y'all niggas can't play me,
And I Stay with a vest on my chest, liek the rest cuz niggas wanna spraaay me

And Y'all Niggas is Stupid
And Y'all niggas can't shoot quick
And Y'all niggas gun loose it
I mean that Head on YOur neck, bitch you better protect you bout to get looted


V2

Check this, lets look whats goin on aroun me
2 CV's and a impala, tryna surround me
Im in the hood wit a AK and a banana
My face, My wrist stay wrapped in a bandana
And i aint bloodin or crippin, but im Murderin
If a slob or a crab run game on me, then im squirtin em
yeh i caught a fe bodies, cuz guns and clips is my hobby
and i got chips liek whitney and bobby
Im the king yeah i stand in that place
Most my Pr-ojects down wit BLue liek a handicap space
Listen dick nigga, i aint playin no games now
I said 8 not 7 take this O of cocaine nooow
and heres a tip, they aint love you then they aint liek you now
if they dont spray you up then they gun knife you down
Niggas aint pussy when they broke
For 50 dollars niggas will run up on you and slice your throat

HOOK

Im in that 2 door cobra and the bodys kitted
Got Fiends wiiilin in the Projects like Gottis in it

*gun shots* nigga say what?

Big ziplock bag and the crack is in it
im so high, even the eyes on my hat is blitted
y'all ngigas tryna loot me, then you better shoot me
cuz i keep my left hand, right by my uzi
bitches in the Projects, all on my cock
Fiends in the Projects all on my block
Crystals and diamonds, all on my watch
Rhinestone handle all on my glock
If you wanna ill me here i am
downtown at the Pork n Beans 3 AM
Or im Uptown on Broadway willin out on 7th
Bakc on the flats in my jects' where we livin in heaven
WE got Cash, Drugs, Autos and Two's
amd we stay gettin pussy like a hungry pooch
Y'all niggas is punks, YOu wifin up Jumps
I wasn't chasin these hoes i was gettin my weight up


HOOK


PA nigga

uppin

You Need 2 links to decent feedback on others open mics or this will get closed.

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A lot of the pieces i dont really like cause they get boring and repetitive but i actually liked this verse, there was nothing really deep in it but obviously it was a drug/thug like piece so i just took it for what it was.
The thing i liked most about the piece was the flow you kept it moving pretty nice the hook was dope too.
The only thing i could say to you would be too keep the flow more consistent you lost it on some of the lines also try and add in some multies and punchlines.metaphors to your pieces it will make them stand out more.
Keep writing keep posting

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