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Thread: Murdering Multies

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    The True Psycho of RB
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    Murdering Multies

    My game is mental, i mame the pencils, which im holding
    I maybe manic, but a crazy planet, i spit my flows in
    What i write between the papers lines, will rape ya mind
    But if you sue me for it, you best truely forefit, before i break ya spine
    Im a thug with a heart, to me love is a farce
    My rhymes are treason, im the reason, for the blood in the park
    Fuck jokes, i cut folks, for trainers mobiles, plus coats
    I dont hurry my crimes, study my rhymes, you cant get enough dope
    Yes im arrogant but back it up, lyrically im the top one
    This aint a metaphor, i'll wet ya whore, physically with a shotgun
    Too many motherfucking thoughts circling around my cerebral
    I put strife on verses, life long curses, are hurtling down on my people
    I choose to breath, killing myself with booze and weed
    My book of chapters bleed, i'll look after my seed, before im excused to leave
    Im gonna be painfully honest and tell you i gotta death wish
    Maybe in time i could change that, but my insane raps, are all im left with

    Hook: Im murdering multies like a monster daily
    Im looking at the sky screaming save me
    No response comes so i blow my brains out
    Every motherfucker knows my name now

    The date of my death etched in my weed smoke
    The bait of my breath left for my enemies quotes
    Black mind, white mind, what im reaching when i write rhymes
    I put boots to plans, i aint superman, i dont ever fight crime
    Family knowing i'll fail, one arrest away from going to jail
    Sitting in a cell, wishing it was hell, im cold and im pale
    A crow appears looks at me as he sits on my shoulder
    It never fits, like a terroist, when he spits on a soldier
    Posses sporadic thoughts, an addicts corpse, appears now
    The reaper comes, to eat the son, as im writing my tears down
    Fuck that, there aint a sensitive bone in my body
    Im afflicted and im stressing, addicted to depression, alone i aint sorry
    I still pray that the devil left my mothers womb alone
    Im writing tunes im stoned, i love the funeral home, put that on my tombstone
    People still couldnt understand me if they read all my songs
    Just in case your wondering this is an allusion i was dead all along

    This is a real dark piece from me this is pretty much my mind state, i gave it the title murdering multies cause i put loads of multies and inside rhymes in the piece.

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    sickkkkkkk, the piece was sick. I loved reading it, the multis were nice and at a constant flow, the flow was nice and thw wrdplay was nice as well, cant really pick out nethin bad in this, plus i liked the chorus and last line of chorus is very true.

    nice drop bro, keep droppin ( a sick writer from wales kwl)

    Peace

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    flow was nice, i liked it, topic was really kool, you had sum real good multies in it, rhymes were also good, strucutre was aiight, need to elevate on that, but still this was real good, overall in high 8 range, keep it up, man ytou got sum rap skillz

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    legit title.

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