Blood Angels (Feat. Arch_Angel)

Keystyle..Goliath=Bold...Arch_Angel=Regular Text.


When the Blood Angels roam the streets, Beef out like well done.
I swell sons and leave ya mind shook like the video Kel run. (R. Kelly)
I'm a bionic lyricist, It ain't hard to tell.
That Goliath'll have you tryin to Diplomat me like Juelz.
I can't stop rappin cause the war path is endless.
And niggas ain't yet clappin but soon gettin respect will win this.
I'm in it to win, Yall tryin to win so just give up.
Cause I can do favors for cowards who really wanna live up.
Shift your ribs up, Fake hustlas makin my hammer blam.
But then they jet on sight, Doin the run scene like Hammer man.

...give me the mic.

Angel leakin through, Seepin like poisonous gas.
Cause I'm gettin in ya brain, Lyrics kickin ya ass, Killin ya fast.
I'm like a pack of Newports to ya lungs when you breathin.
Beatin you black and blue now I got you thinkin even.
What you gone do now I'm through like a plow.
Angel new to this but I still got you like wow.
I talk alot of shit but speakin royalty.
I'm like BK cause I'll flame broil ya B.
We the best in this biz, We got no room for improvement.
Yea we killed a couple John Does but you can't prove it.
My slugs like M&Ms cause they melt ya chest not in your hand.
I'm in this group not in the band, Goliath and Angel together again.



Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...93#post2987693
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post2987720

nice rhymes and vocab was real nice here
flow and strucutre was prett good
topic was interesting and enjoyable to read
great job chosin this topic and great job supporting it well
great job overall and keep it up

pretty basic drop...
but both verses had nice flow...
Didn't really know what the topic was... i guess how you both are the best on this site, or it may have been just about how good you are...
Anyways, vocab needs to be upped and become more creative...

keep elevatin and drop some more shit...
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what every body else said pretty much...check out tha link in my sig titled an undeclared love...elevate

"...we got no room for improvement"
uh huh. the first step is admitting it to yourself, boys, you have plenty of room for improvement. This piece was okay. But, once you start talking about killing people and comparing yourself to Burger King at the same time, I gotta draw the line.

You need to define something really basic before you write a collab: What the fuck is this piece about? If you want it to be about being the baddest gankstuhs ever, that's fine...but write about that. Don't piece together a bunch of random shitty punches and call it a verse, because it isn't. There has to be some connection, some reason these lines are in the piece. There is no reason for any of the lines you guys wrote. Try to write about something worth writing about.

Give me a topic and I'll keystyle it.
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listen i didnt come up with ne thing i had fun with this if you got a problem thats cool outtie

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shit, was decent fa real.
Nothin spectacular though, first verse had good flow, 1 decent punch, and was respectable, second verse, was clesha's stumbled over, but for a newbie, wasnt awful
In honesty it was aiight so i 'm givin it...............

6.0/10.0