No Turning Back

inceratedoe- self centred

AJ Diablo- Love is life..

I took this from Kelis' debut album and the song of the same name. i wanna record this using the beat and her vocals so i included the song's lyrics, marked SL here. its dope song, btw. (SL are sung, stupid)



Johnny 6-feet
We're leaving on a spaceship, we finally made it
To a planet adjectsent, without need for paylsips
Work a sweat for a cheque, this life could break thugs
We could try and make love but it still aint love
Its a struggle for transcendence, finding the real deal
Is like serving a sentence without one appeal
I love this girl, but we're try'na find something greater
Downloading reams of data for a formula Omega
Later in the workshop, building a craft
To leave Earth behind and start chilling at last
I'm a villian for that, and with hope i paint doves
To come to life and fly away but it still aint love
We hit the vaccuum, to pack rooms, pea size small
And glide through outer space, at least we tried y'all
My thoughts and aspirations are burning this track
Now the plan is in motion, no turning it back


SL (hook)
When in love with someone
When she leaves you can still feel it
Since you feel they're the one
Just close your eyes and you can still see it
If it's bright as the sun
There's no turning back


Johnny 6-feet
Your highness, i'm yours to star fleet command
If you want me to love you or start beef and brand
A potential usurper with your insignium
Or just get down and dirty with your cirriculum
If this aint love, then i don't know what is
We've escaped from reality, let's never stop this
We're always on the rise and i'm learning from that
From this life to the next, no turning it back

SL
You can search around the world
For different people for a thing called love
And you'll return with stories on how they perceive you
It just wasn't love
Your friends will say how they often see it
They ain't talking 'bout love
Just go inside and figure the many that don't believe it
Cause it just ain't love


SL (hook)
When in love with someone
When she leaves you can still feel it
Since you feel they're the one
Just close your eyes and you can still see it
If it's bright as the sun
There's no turning back


Johnny 6-feet
In summery, you're my life, you're the sun to me
A pair of dreamers in love and its fun to be
At any function we, outshine the competition
Still on the expedition for the next apollo mission
Its a small step for man, a giant leap for us
All the years we keep in lust, we can reap for trust
Leave our old lives behind in a murderous act
Eyes fixed on the horizon, no turning it back

SL
I don't need your lavish lifestyle to please me
Cause it just ain't love
If you notice kings and queens divorce so easy
Cause it just ain't love
The world could change if starving mouths were eating
But there is no love
When your heart is starving now's the time to feed it
Enriched with love


SL (hook)
When in love with someone
When she leaves you can still feel it
Since you feel they're the one
Just close your eyes and you can still see it
If it's bright as the sun
There's no turning back



feedback?

103! 103! 103!

For a start, Ive not heard the Kelis track, after Ive heard it Ill rethink my feed to this piece.

But overall I liked it, you had good concepts and a good idea, I dont know if you took that from the song but it really appealed to me and I really liked the way you followed on with the whole love still ain't love... The first verse in my opinion was the best, and you used vocab that expresses really well and you have good imagery and it wasnt really emotional, but you had the twinge of emotion that helped set this piece off. I think you tied in kelis's lyrics really well with you own, I can see you took her ideas and tied your own in with them and it came across really well.

I will add more feed to this after I've heard the song, but I do like this piece.

103! 103! 103!

yeah, i liked the idea... but i didnt really like the multi's to much.. work on those foo.. but mainly the concept was the best part.. so keep at it!

pretty good stucture. very good imagery i liked the topic good flow this was a good peice im feeling it pretty good shit yo. 1

I liked this, I thot the structure was good....

Its a struggle for transcendence, finding the real deal
Is like serving a sentence without one appeal
I love this girl, but we're try'na find something greater
Downloading reams of data for a formula Omega

Dope lines...do work on the multies tho...will bring out the flow

uppin' this^^

lol @ issue, thanks man. 103!

but what the fuck you people gonna tell me about multi's? i can do them back to front, upsidedown and in my sleep. get the fuck outta here.

This was dope a really different kind of song from you the flow was on point as always the vocab was used well to desribe your feelings and emotions.
The structure was fine, i normally dont like the relationship/love raps but this was done in a different non corny way so i thought it was dope.

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Uppin this for Johnny who cant get on much!!