A-team Diss Yo Cash Check This!!!

eyo this is for the bitch ass a-team,

eyo cash... life is a hustle aint it,
fuck that...ya hustle's like ya muscle....you aint got none,
you never on the grind....jay z's jus on ya mind,
the thug in you's like a fugitive....its hard to find,
yeah so wat i applied 2 be in yo kru,
that was before i saw you was a wanksta thru n thru,

eyo brooklyn....life is a method man...4 u,
fuck that....methods like the rest of us...he dont respect u,
i shit i forget u from the marcy projects!,
im bein sarcastic G...fear's not an emotion u bring up in me,
u feelin a little exposed homey?,
y dont u get on the phone 2 al capone,
tell him im takin the leaders throne,

u had your chance fools,
but you chose to reject me,
not only that you chose to disrespect me,
but both yo styles like a broken mirror,
YOU CANT REFLECT ME!!!!

yo mod here u go my 2 feedbacks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...97#post2256897
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...10#post2256910

i thought you were gonna diss the REAL a-team for a minute, lol.

some pretty hard lines, especially the final one. I think the originality of your punches could be worked on though. You should up your vocab some as well. Its was an ok piece. I think you've got the makings of a battlecat, so keep practising man.

keep posting, if you could rep one of mine i'd appriciate it.

yo callin all A-team haterz for feedback on this shizzle!!!

yo that was pretty dope forsure like good job

yo thanx alot silent j keep holdin it down homey!!

"u had your chance fools,
but you chose to reject me,
not only that you chose to disrespect me,
but both yo styles like a broken mirror,
YOU CANT REFLECT ME!!!!"

lol :spit:
Gattman is pissy cause his wack rhymes did not get him in the A-Team

Decent piece...nothing amazing
good punches and the ending was kinda...crybaby....
but whatever works man...you pull the crybaby thing off well

keep droppin shit like this :thumbup:

"you never on the grind....jay z's jus on ya mind,
the thug in you's like a fugitive....its hard to find,......

not only that you chose to disrespect me,
but both yo styles like a broken mirror,
YOU CANT REFLECT ME!!!!"

Those were my the best lines in there good job man but you should listen to what "johnny 6 Feet" said he right.
Keep doin ya thing cuz

that was pretty wack...i'm from the marcy too, i met Rob (bob) a couple times at the com. center, he's lyrcis aint all that but he got mad flow...does he do audio here cause he should...anyway back on the topic, some ok punches but the vocab and flow wasnt great, keep tryin

PEace

that was OK, but still not good enugh ta get ya on da A-Team bitchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hah, yo..On tha real? Ain't too hard...No flow, and that's what i believe makes a rap...a rap...But you did have some good lines, gave me an "Ooh" here and there...Maybe if you didn't sound like a little crybaby it would've been better.

"that was OK, but still not good enugh ta get ya on da A-Team bitchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
.....................bahahahhahahahahhaha

umm...didn't know where the hostility was comin towards us (ateam)...i duno did you get rejected?...didn't read the post cuz didn't feel like readin some more diss on ateam...its alright how you feel...maybe one day you'll cheer yourself up and beat one of us...haha...yea right...1

Lol
poor gattman.....

harsh words harsh words.....

yo not bad G...some of the vocab cud use a lil touchin up...also this verse didnt bring throu your true emotions but keep at it..you'll get there...