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I Will Be Heard
Lord Only Knows The Way I'm Feeling Flows
Instead of pimpin and killing ho's,stealing clothes
Headshots feeling blows,like Lincoln was kill in rows
Was feelin shows, nows he was pealin shows
Appealing messed constitution, declare of birth
Preparing the dirt, declaring the hurt of anniholation
Worth of the nation, contamination of revolation
Hesitation,as my body awaits graves resovation
Slaves transformation, Craves like manistation
Inselation of inspiration from my lord
Lord of Imaginaton, cord of evaquation
Is afford cut short, like a video game to click abort
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big words little meaning.
or at least resolution...maybe im just not into
it enough to see a deeper meaning but all i see
is a black poet on a talent show spitting big
words at a crowd that probably dont know what
a thesaurus is.
get better flow. or maybe im dumb...w/e
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This was a decent short verse.
I aint a fan of using all the big ass words but you got a nice flow.
Just try and just say wat u feel and not using big words that the average person wouldnt understand plus it makes no sense using massive words like that.
Overall a decent drop.
Return the favour.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=172018
