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penmenship(hit n run)
ARTIST:NONCENTZ
ALBUM:MOST GIFTED LOSER
TRACK:PENMENSHIP verse 1 of 3
ay yo,
i teach lessons, speak blessings, leave you dijesting
my dick resson in a session.
i'll rip you using franchises as my weapon
NONCENTZ stay handing out beef in the booth like consession.
who ever testen get the death penalty like a leathel injection
im that hot if you survive you die by second smoke injestion.
it's noncentz the flaming legend 757 reppin
who in 7 bars will show those of you half steppin
the "stairway to heaven" on a remix with led zepplin
i'm still spitting flames~on~lames using my oxegen~for~propain
leaven legions~stained with 3 dergee lesions~in~pain
or turned to debree~it's~insain......you played yourself like a game
so your ending credits give acredit to akklaim.
most of you cant picture the mindframe. or face it your wack
i could sponsor toilet paper and you wouldnt shit on my name.
in fact.....
im about to react like napalm elements/when they impact/
if you insult my intellegeance/ i'll reinact andl recreate the events /
that almost wiped hiroshima off the map.
high jack your train~of~thought and switch your tracks
from rap to pop singles only printed on wax and adats.
turn your daps to bitch slaps .....in the form of a high five
so anyone claiming your ill will have they hand break out in hives.
your like a lesbians thighs with a man inside.
trying to act sly on the slide till your fake lives collide.
that coinsides with career suicide and i pleed guilty of genocide
cause we both emcees and my homicide '
on you is the reason your career wont survive.
but i took an oath i qoute before i get in the booth
toexpose those foes that deep throat so with no hope
they couldnt spit wisdom if i knocked out they back tooth.
im uncooth and spit rhymes your career couldnt recoupe
have you spoonen your boy in the form of a scoupe
and beat your ass reptetively like an ending song loop
hook: you need to check your penmanship
signing a contract dont gaurentee you memebership
or hip hop fellowship....
on the average your either recycled your garbage
so takes your 5 cents in cash or get back in the trash.
this the comeback where real rap and wack clash
real emcees is the new wave making a splash
like noahs arch for the half heart...
fo the real this the first strike to take back the art.
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okay i edited the other 2 verses out to make it easier for you l;azy fucks that dont read
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honestly the verse kinda bored me, decent structure...but just not any great lines as far as text go...now on audio it might SOUND good...all im sayin is as far as text it doesnt look good.
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tight drop bro.......i liked the openin lines!....good structure and ill disagree with Rodge....it aint borin'........
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Wassup Word
people just be sleepin on yo shit............lol...............nobody reads long verses anymore.. this was dope man..........but because its an actuall verse to a song just put it on audio for all these lazy fucks...................good flow and everything just put it on audio...........stay up man
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gd drop word i liked, as far as there bein no gd lines thats bullshit, the lines i thought where best where:
"i could sponsor toilet paper and you wouldnt shit on my name."
and
"high jack your train~of~thought and switch your tracks"
keep reppin word
PEACE
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Thanks Im Debating Weather Or Not To Post The Other 2 Verses
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this shit was hot dogg...i dont know what the fuck that Rodge guy was talkin about!!!!I saw some really hot lines in this piece...shit would really be hot for a audio...hot drop dogg keep it up
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well hit me up twin i have a remix that id like to collab
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was feelin' this....are you the same W~P from mrblunt? if so, its ya boy S-Nova....if not, i'll just look dumb. Back to the crit tho', had nice concepts and vocab, was kinda lost on the flow, some didnt rhyme, maybe its MY accent. Overall I was feelin it tho, keep droppin.
