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Straight up in da Hood
Refrain from saying the game was made for playing,
You're on your knees for the God, but it isn’t for praying,,
I ain't just saying, that I'm fly, this isn't a fair race,
Baghdad accused me of invading restricted airspace,
I spit that alchemy fluid, you want to battle me, do it,
And get lifted off your feet like a cavalry unit,
My rhyme's relentless when I combine the sentence,
It's all about the fire, like Donald Trump was my apprentice,
If a warrior can't rep wit' this, why would I let a bitch?,
You'll get beaten worse than Native American settlements,
Only roll with tough bitches that put a four to your skull,
And always catch her man creeping like the border patrol,
Designed to own beef, an O-G, when I throw free's,
Don’t need, weed, I fuckin smoke keys,
You can’t dethrone me, a known beast, when my flows reach,
It'll smash, your tracks, until every fucking note bleeds,
I’m so street, my throne keeps, its own heat,
Broke screens, you don’t know C, u don’t want to try GOD,
So elite, bones scream, when I fucking sign on,
Minds gone, cats scared to type” Ron",
Mics drawn, as the skies dawn, the earth quakes,
I’ve got pussy palmed, like your mom, on your fucking birth date,
Merk fakes, burn lames, when words flame, my flows scorch,
Oh lord, I’ve choked corps, until I fucking closed morgues,
With no force, a lone course, country controls death,
You can tell I’m an old vet, by the way I fucking hold text(tecs),
I can’t let my soul rest, sometimes I fucking forget to breathe,
If it doesn’t involve money, then it just doesn’t exist to me,
Not just another sick MC, there’s poison in his teeth,
I could rip this bitches spleen, cause he fucking mentioned C,
Shit this bitch is king, the lord don’t got to play nice,
Cause when I hit this key, Rapbattles.com becomes a fucking grave site.
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shit was fire dogg, the on your knees to god line is used alot but its all good....
flow was on point lyrics were solid too.. Shit was pretty dope...
stay constant throughout the whole peice... and had some nice hard hitting lines in there..
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you had easily followable rhymes but your flow was like aged 12. I mean it's cool if you are really hood you ain't no english scholar so it's good I guess. I'd just say pay more attention to subliminal messages...try not to be so blatont.
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Thanks for the feed back. :) Anymore comments?
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it was simple but flow awas on point and had every ounce of potential needed too spit stay up and peep mines
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Thanks for the comment man. Come on guys, holla at ya boi!
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You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
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i thought this piece was tight, structure was off a bit but ya flow was nice a couple of nice punches espically the last 2 lines, overall it was dope.
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Come on guys leave me some feedback...
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yeah pretty simple rhymes, and u didnt really take any tough words and make em rhyme. good structure. keep elevatin
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Aight, thanks for the feedback. Ima make a new song today and post it up later.
