The Unknown Road

(intro) Dear Mom:
You thought i got all my lyrics from the CDs i've heard
so you took 'em away, while sayin', "See, he's absurd!"
Now i see that you were... completely unsure...
weather or not i would be free like a bird.
If we in the world could just learn to pretend
to all get along, then we all could be friends.
But, then again, wit' today and these times,
if it's written and it's spitten, it's displayed as a crime.

(verse1) I had it all in my grasp; I had it all in my hands;
but it was too good to last, 'n' I gave in to demands.
I gave in to the fans, and they chopped my up,
but then i got up, and now you'll never stop me, what?!
You wouldn't spot me up if i had 96-pound-balls,
becuz you're all so evil, you would wittness my downfall.
And, cuz it now all is different, i'll stand tall,
shoot you in the face, and blow your brains on the back wall
and that's all! Or is it? But what if it isn't?!
what if i had a knife to your throat, while you were pissin'?
Would your attitude change? Would you then start admittin'
that you were wrong all along? Would you quit all your dissin'?
Now, i don't know if that'll happen; i don't know if it could;
but it should, and when it happens, it should happen for good.
but until that time comes, i'm goin' off at two ends
becuz i'm pissed off for havin' all these falsified friends.

(chorus X2) Now, I've been down a road that's completly unknown;
I've been gunnin' it 'n' runnin' from the place i called home
for a couple of years. I been drownin' in tears,
and the voices of these demons seem to pound in my ears.








that's it for now. i'm gonna have 3 verses. tell me what yall think.
links: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=156633

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...63#post1858963

uppin so i can actually get some goddamn input.

uppin

Nice style you got there..
I see you got some pretty decent multies and your flow is not too bad actually. Was a fairly good drop. Nice work.

Btw, go check out my OM.. Thanks.

thanks a lot; much appriciated! any more input from others?

a nice drop there man, liked the flow and style of the piece. You got good structure in there too, overall a good drop.

Holla back at ya boy and give feedback on my drop on the link below.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=157668

yeh i was feelin that good topic as well nice vocab n flow good work

Aiight..I thought you need to work on yer vocab but you had some decent multies that made up for that. Ya flow was good and so was the topic. It wasnt the strongest I have ever read but it was a really good one never the less.