10 lines
reg rules
blind drops
due tonight
yep.. goodluck.
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10 lines
reg rules
blind drops
due tonight
yep.. goodluck.
bitch is good i must admitt, played lines comes outta this lloyd
in here u might be goku, but bitch im an android
i mite put a filler, but im bored and hes just worthless
ill put it straight to the point, so this bitch will be all but clueless
i noe u got ur TAB: Tactical Advance to Battle
but by lookin at ur verse now, it seems snake-ish, starting to rattle
u suck like, lets see, like the shows they put on fox
and people a'matically know whos gay, when u say TAB rocks
i noe im from sydney (aka: down under) but fuk man ur like macintosh
sank fast and gone over board, i made ur ass micro-soft
uhh tab its past midnight u gonna cum at me or wat man.. uve been on for long..
you're a killa, you'll understand, when i tear ya shit apart..
didnt think ya had the guts to drop.. till i stomped on ur heart..
killa always tried to fit in.. but to be honest.. it was a lil crammed..
he tried to buckle down and win.. but his fuckin seatbelt jammed..
get tired of battling noobs.. but i figured ud put up a brawl..
decided to test your Weight.. got caught up in the Middle of it all..
tried to ride with the best.. gotta be this tall to ride, sport..
so he tried standing tall.. wrote his verse.. and sold himself short..
too late to duck out now.. the battles already been linked..
he had the gut feeling he'd win.. sure knows how to Kill a Instinct..
yeah, busy & shit.. goodluck man.
up up & away.. 1.
that was a hot battle..i must admit u both put in good shit but to me the the win goes to Tab lloyd....ill hit this back wen i get muh 100 posts later on tonight
uppin thiss....
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bitch is good i must admitt, played lines comes outta this lloyd
in here u might be goku, but bitch im an android
-I like dragonballZ, but this shit was wack
i mite put a filler, but im bored and hes just worthless
ill put it straight to the point, so this bitch will be all but clueless
-worthless and clueless dont rhyme.... weak
i noe u got ur TAB: Tactical Advance to Battle
but by lookin at ur verse now, it seems snake-ish, starting to rattle
-decent at best
u suck like, lets see, like the shows they put on fox
and people a'matically know whos gay, when u say TAB rocks
-not feelin it
i noe im from sydney (aka: down under) but fuk man ur like macintosh
sank fast and gone over board, i made ur ass micro-soft
-the best bar u had, set up was to stretched and was worded badly makin it only decent
you're a killa, you'll understand, when i tear ya shit apart..
didnt think ya had the guts to drop.. till i stomped on ur heart..
-not a good start
killa always tried to fit in.. but to be honest.. it was a lil crammed..
he tried to buckle down and win.. but his fuckin seatbelt jammed..
-ok, ha, i like it
get tired of battling noobs.. but i figured ud put up a brawl..
decided to test your Weight.. got caught up in the Middle of it all..
-iight
tried to ride with the best.. gotta be this tall to ride, sport..
so he tried standing tall.. wrote his verse.. and sold himself short..
-nice
too late to duck out now.. the battles already been linked..
he had the gut feeling he'd win.. sure knows how to Kill a Instinct..
-nice finish
Vote: Tab. for a better overall verse, he had better structure and flow, wittier punches, and nice word play, killa's verse lack creativity or wit and his structure was pretty poor, jus about every other line was stretched which made the flow choppy, return the fava 1
2nd.......
3rd.. fukin dont sleep on this shit.. leave l.i.n.k.s.. jus vote honestly.
okay, hit the link i nthe sig after this. thanks...
anyways, this was a one sided battle. killa had some great concepts, but the way they were phrased was wack. his opener was almost there, but isnt Goku better than androids?? sorry lol. anyways, tab lloyd came hot, i dont think i can pull anything bad from his verse.
tab lloyd best verse:
killa always tried to fit in.. but to be honest.. it was a lil crammed..
he tried to buckle down and win.. but his fuckin seatbelt jammed..
killa best verse:
i noe im from sydney (aka: down under) but fuk man ur like macintosh
sank fast and gone over board, i made ur ass micro-soft
anyways, no hate killa, but he got this. trying to be most honest as possible bro ;)
return the favor!!!
v// Tab
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links hit up like whoa.
This was an iight battle but tab took this one easly,
bitch is good i must admitt, played lines comes outta this lloyd
in here u might be goku, but bitch im an android
lol... still talking about that dragon ball z shyt, pretty decent
i mite put a filler, but im bored and hes just worthless
ill put it straight to the point, so this bitch will be all but clueless
no feeling this line multies were alittle strected
i noe u got ur TAB: Tactical Advance to Battle
but by lookin at ur verse now, it seems snake-ish, starting to rattle
decent
u suck like, lets see, like the shows they put on fox
and people a'matically know whos gay, when u say TAB rocks
wack
i noe im from sydney (aka: down under) but fuk man ur like macintosh
sank fast and gone over board, i made ur ass micro-soft
pretty decent closer, but try not to put yourself in your verse..
overall pretty decent from a newb bu tab took this one
tab:
you're a killa, you'll understand, when i tear ya shit apart..
didnt think ya had the guts to drop.. till i stomped on ur heart..
decent opener , alittle played though
killa always tried to fit in.. but to be honest.. it was a lil crammed..
he tried to buckle down and win.. but his fuckin seatbelt jammed..
lol... pretty funny...
get tired of battling noobs.. but i figured ud put up a brawl..
decided to test your Weight.. got caught up in the Middle of it all..
okay
tried to ride with the best.. gotta be this tall to ride, sport..
so he tried standing tall.. wrote his verse.. and sold himself short..
lol... nice wordplay..
too late to duck out now.. the battles already been linked..
he had the gut feeling he'd win.. sure knows how to Kill a Instinct..
decent closer good punchlines ... nice personals..
pverall tab you took this one in my view good battle to bother but killa just needed to come alittle more harder or pick on some one on his own level
tab took this with ease.... Tab had good punches and had pretty good concepts.... all in all his verse came with more complexity and creativity... was a much more enjoyable read... and just out did killa's verse in every aspect.... Killa i wasent feeling you punches especially the goku android.... wtd is that... was terrible... not the best ive seen from you i know you can come harder....
vote - Tab loyd
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