stop the violence

we need to come up with some sort of ceasefire.
If it was an East Coast/West Coast or not
too many soljas on tha street gettin shot
we need to put a stop to this before it gets out of hand
stop this shit for your childrens furure try to understand
put away dem gats , that shit is for dirty rats
muhfuckerz from the gutter who be usin dem baseballbats
dont start killin the streetz , walk straight on your feet
follow the right path , give space for our children to breathe
nomore violence its guidin u straight to your grave
it aint bout surviving anymore , its bout being weak or be brave
we keepin the youngsta's inside
in times like this its just better to hide
playgrounds turned into battlegrounds
imagin for yaself how a gunshot sounds

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yo son i like that drop that some hot stuff right therr keep it up

what the fuck are you babbling about...
no im just kidding... good drop man nice and short kind a left me hangin at the end you should follow up on this make a sequal... but one things for shure your right about the violence.... message was good im into medas so if you added some it would of made this much more interesting.... other than that peace...
return the flavor...bonita
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Word i done told u i thought this was pretty good, feeling da concept n everything man. Keep droppin these, and word to da dude there bout a sequel, would b dope.

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Yo man what u rote sounded good bu it wernt original
And also rite m gonna b a bi philosophical ere bu what ur ritin abar ere dusnt make sense ur sayin 2 stop all violence bu da jus can never appen bcuz da violence aspect is sumthinig da is built in2 r systems b4 we can choose wether it 2 b there or not so ya gotta think abar da b4 u rite sumthini involving violence.
Bu uvawise gd drop mann
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yo i like dat kid its hot

that was pretty good man, enjoyed the read, it does kinda make you feel how violence effects people and the fear some people face,which is what you were aiming for i guess but nice drop anyways.