BeWaRe ThE hEaT....

Yo, check, check...
Beware the speech
Everything go a blaze when I speak...
Beware the heat
Itz 'bout 500 degrees on my street...
I came to breach
Infiltrated the system on low key...
Not in too deep
The strong survive I'm far from being weak...
Changin up the flow erdicatin my foes
Thinkin they could stand against the "infernol"...
Playin with fire somethin they did'nt know
They had to touch it besotted* with the glow...
I peer pressure fools with low self esteem
Here smoke this it'll make your dearest dreams...
Years fly by the streets gotta a new dope fiend
My pockets fat from the new play on the green...
Its amazin
In the RB there's alot of hatin...
Nothin shakin
Yeah you can qoute me I'm not mistakin...
Man times' wastin
Just got here and ready for a vacation...
I'm foresaken
The only 1 with the great expatations...
I'm a criminal but I neva tell lies
Can't see me i'm subliminal* from your eyes...
You could call me OJ cuz I play with knives
Cuttin off all your lifelines and taking lives...
I respond accordingly to beef
I'll make it so that you'll be pickin up ya teeth...
Now you makin that whistly sound when you speak
B.I.* keepin it real strictly for the streets........

*besotted- infactuated, love sick, etc.
*subliminal- hidden, concealed, subconcious
*B.I.-bLaZiN_iNfeRnoL......

I'll appreciate some luv, hit me i'll give back the luv...
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I like your rhyme scheme....ahaha...it's funny cuz the style is so street. Hmmmm...I can't really comment on much since their wasn't much content...You had a point to address, which was self-glorification, and you clearly made that point so people can't hate that.

I gotta hate on the OJ line tho...I've heard that way to many times...and you really didn't make a good flip on the concept...you just stated the obvious.

Overall, kinda nice. It sounds like sumthin' that would be spit in a freestyle cypher outside on the corner with a bunch of people. For what it is...it's ok.

Decent work. My first OM was 10x worse, trust me lol. Keep at it.

pz. god bless.
- T-West.

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

Credz, those are the two links at the bottom...

Oh my bad, I thought they were part of your sig, Sorry about that! :)

Man, this was dope, i really liked that line about o.j, i'm like o.j and i play with knives(blazin infernol). Yeah dog, i give it up to you and will keep on seeing your work cuz my time wasnt wasted, it was worth it.

That was whack...honest to god truth...OMG, thats just the same played shit on TV. Yes, I am critising you, so do not accept negativity as demoralising. That was just plain whack. How that other people see that was good, I have no idea, but there on your level, so they probaley do enjoy reading that kinda stuff.

Keep dropping mate....

I appreciate the luv and the no luv....Thank you

this was an ight piece had some shit i liked and didnt i agree with all the shit t-west said keep doing ya thing good freestyle piece stay up