Forsaken Truths..
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Forsaken Truths..
Wow...this was a very good peice. keep up ya work, u have skill
Thanks..Uppin..
wow man...this is a very very exceptional piece...you know what...forget the controlled nonchalant approbation...this piece was hot...this showed a great degree of skill...i loved the flow, it was amazing, i loved the structure, i loved the depth, i loved the content...this is a very very good poem....you know what...im impressed to the point that im going to extend an invite to you into Divine Diction...we need more poets like you...im sure all group members will concur, as i will have them all read this brilliant piece
9.9/10
whoa! this was an awsome peice! it had great emotion that filled every line. and the word structure and flow of this was great too! the sturcture was gret also.. overall this poem is sheer brilliance. great job.
...........fav part...........
he told me the meaning of life was a life of meaning, measured not by your achievements.. but by the memories you breathe in..
^thats awsome......
keep droppin
....bless
Thank You. ^
yo good piece , structure everything was precise only way i could label dis is nice..
good shyt
Thanks Yung.