Ten Lines Max.
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Ten Lines Max.
Due By The End Of Next Monday.
300+ Posts To Vote.
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Ayo,
Jug uh Knot isn't talented, so let me school this bitch.
He reminds me of a diaper,
Always on my ass and clearly full of shit.
Is this an ICP group, crew or juss some dick rode fans.
Jug Uh Knot, Insane Joker Lyricist,
This has to be ICP's Stan.
I love battling herbs, he drops like gay movies fall.
He's so dumb he stuck a phone in his ass,
And thought he made a booty call.
'llI chop ya and yelled out to your crew timber.
He's proud to be IJL, the rest ain't,
That's how come his sig only has 5 members.
Ripped him to shreds, I know his rhymes aren't hard.
After this battle he'll be gone,
Juss like when I look for his avatar.
i was hoping for a no show, i still have a grin..
cuz after that verse, all i need is a..
...no show verse to win
kids name is seven, i must earn his respect
calls american idol racist, cuz he's a reject
your screwed, learn the fuckin basics duuude
told him to throw a punch & said..
still answers newbie call outs, things havent changedQuote:
Originally Posted by Se7eN
not even my crew, IJL, could make Se7en deranged
Another crew battle win for IJL, im getting used to this
his rap skill is full of holes like cheese called "Swiss"
deranged= insane and other meanings
Uppin this for my crew member......................
uppin x1................................................ .......
ok. Decent battle...on se7ens part at least. Jug came okay but that structure hurts my eyes. Seriously, this was a battle, not a topical. Just keep it normal and its easier to read. Besides that, se7en, you had some played stuff in their...but the booty call line made me laugh, dont know if thats played or not but it made me laugh.
Jug...your closer...made me laugh so hard because I couldn't believe it came from you. You do realize that you put that in there right?
v/se7en
uppin x3................................................ ............
7 - Great verse dawg. It was easy to read, unlike Jug's verse. Flow was almost perfect. Liked the structure, it was good. Punches were very good... Problem was, I kinda saw some of 'em comin'. You gotta try to be a bit more complex. But it was aight, they were good enough to beat him.
Jug - Your verse was good too. But the structure was fucked up, wasn't easy to read at all. Your punches were as good as 7's... You could've been more creative though. Flow was good, but 7's flow was better. And like I said, the structure fucked everything up. Personals were there too.
V/7
Sorry to post again...
Return the favor plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129627
Peace
^Can't edit in fl token.
how did i know i was gonna get rode outta this, stop PMing and IMing people to hit up battles so called "honestly" cuz you know they'll vote for you.
Se7en:
Jug uh Knot isn't talented, so let me school this bitch.
He reminds me of a diaper,
Always on my ass and clearly full of shit.
^^elementary... weak.
Is this an ICP group, crew or juss some dick rode fans.
Jug Uh Knot, Insane Joker Lyricist,
This has to be ICP's Stan.
uh.... decent I guess
I love battling herbs, he drops like gay movies fall.
He's so dumb he stuck a phone in his ass,
And thought he made a booty call.
corny and... no.
'llI chop ya and yelled out to your crew timber.
He's proud to be IJL, the rest ain't,
That's how come his sig only has 5 members.
ok personal
Ripped him to shreds, I know his rhymes aren't hard.
After this battle he'll be gone,
Juss like when I look for his avatar.
weak personal, horrible closer...
Overall, a very basic, corny verse with no good punches.
Jug:
i was hoping for a no show, i still have a grin..
cuz after that verse, all i need is a..
...no show verse to win
^^ok opener, not hard hitting but ok
kids name is seven, i must earn his respect
calls american idol racist, cuz he's a reject
nah...
your screwed, learn the fuckin basics duuude
told him to throw a punch & said..
Quote:
Originally Posted by Se7eN
I'll do it in a battle.............or try to...................
^^good personal, quote punches are eh though
still answers newbie call outs, things havent changed
not even my crew, IJL, could make Se7en deranged
nah, wasn't feelin this one
Another crew battle win for IJL, im getting used to this
his rap skill is full of holes like cheese called "Swiss"
horrible, corny closer....
Overall, a weak verse, with one decent punch.
This has to go to Jug, simply because he had one punch that hit. Se7en you had none, all were corny and none were personal at all.... vote - Jug for coming slightly less weak.
pz
Jug uh Knot isn't talented, so let me school this bitch.
-nothing much there, bad opener
He reminds me of a diaper,
Always on my ass and clearly full of shit.
-overplayed
Is this an ICP group, crew or juss some dick rode fans.
-nothing, just a question
Jug Uh Knot, Insane Joker Lyricist,
This has to be ICP's Stan.
-ok
I love battling herbs, he drops like gay movies fall.
He's so dumb he stuck a phone in his ass,
And thought he made a booty call.
-ok, that was old as fuck, and teriibly corny
'llI chop ya and yelled out to your crew timber.
-not a punch
He's proud to be IJL, the rest ain't,
That's how come his sig only has 5 members.
-what? weak punch, attempt at a personal, but didint hit hard
Ripped him to shreds, I know his rhymes aren't hard.
After this battle he'll be gone
-weak punch, didnt really diss him
Juss like when I look for his avatar.
-ok simile and personal
weak verse man, barely any creativity and no hard hitting punches
i was hoping for a no show, i still have a grin..
cuz after that verse, all i need is a..
...no show verse to win
-ok, nothing big
kids name is seven, i must earn his respect
calls american idol racist, cuz he's a reject
-first line was out of the blue, but 2nd was alright
your screwed, learn the fuckin basics duuude
told him to throw a punch & said..
Quote:
Originally Posted by Se7eN
I'll do it in a battle.............or try to...................
-good personal
still answers newbie call outs, things havent changed
not even my crew, IJL, could make Se7en deranged
ok personal
Another crew battle win for IJL, im getting used to this
his rap skill is full of holes like cheese called "Swiss"
over-played closer
over all, jug had the upper hand,
coming more consistent with the personals
seven, you had some over-played shit, like that booty call thing
omg, yo ive known that joke since i was little, terrible man
v/jug, for haing more personals and not as over-played
ok now poll on my battle jug
^^edit* there was a personal from Se7en, but it was a sig personal.... blah