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10-14 lines.
I'll post first.
Standard votin rules apply.
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Shit kid.. there's countless ways to clown ya frail rep
but instead i'll help
an have ya head rollin so you can watch ya step
Note where i'm from duke.. then take note of ya fate
shred this hoe
only nice cos im like Jack The Ripper lookin to rape
There's no escape.. damn.. i dont even gotta get personal
it aint cool
but who cares when i can jus name flip all day with this fool
I told u strait.. i'm bored.. i sit keyin to eleviate the mind
Look: im better you'll find
cos killin lil kids is what i do to pass the time
Excuses are ready
Kids a prophet of doom.. it cant be good for ya healthQuote:
Originally Posted by Rippar
You were already Judged unworthy of respect
got ate in his first battle
now he's hopin my illness is gonna rub off an infect
To end the confusion i'll make it as clear as i can
i wanna bump up my record
an Rippar here sacrificed self like a true loyal fan.
Illtalic, "the illest rapper ever", yeah sure I agree,
this bitch is so diseased, he seems displeased,
that he got HIV with such ease,
Next time u decide to fuck G's, use a condom to prevent STD's.
IJL is the east side crew, that'll be gettin smoked
...through and through, even if i'm unprovoked,
i'll still cook you, just to make home brew,
i heard about ya mama, she's been captured by London Zoo,
your more fucked up than a Nazi Jew,
Illtalic and his eastside homies,
Just got their wrists slit, bloodloss from arteries,
Ladies such as these persist to exist, and give no apologies.
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Wow
Vote: itallic
Itallics opener destroyed Rippars entire verse with the wordplay, he had good flow and style, and punches that were hard hitting. He also came with personals which killed Rippar
Rippar had no flow, shit was uneven and choppy makin it very hard to follow. Weak punches and no meta's, similes or wordplay. The STD thing is played, I used a line like that way back against Smoka, it was played than, and it still is.
Keep elivatin dude, make your shit more complex, come up with similes, dont just make fun of the person using basic words and vocab.
Vote: Itallic
I expect an honest peep frum both you even tho 1 cant vote, thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...64#post1345664
dam rippar he got u yo..you even said it yaself u was gone get murdered in the battle..wat is u stupid..u must like havin a losin record
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Holla.
rip- easy win.. no j/p.. lol.. ehhh.. this wasn't very good my man. Didn't flow that well and ur strucutre was off.. your punches were pretty weak. I mean, I hand it to you going up against ill anyway.. pussie boys aren't cool. But yea... he took you.
illtalic- You came... ehh.. I know probably weren't trying all that hard here. Your verse was alright.. clearly enough to do the job and thats all that counts.. better punches, flow, strucutre, everything...
vote- ill
Hit this up.. pz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125600
still waitin for an honest return vote for my peep
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125616
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illtalic- good verse nice punches and good vocab,good opener.
and i likes the finishing line,your punches hit harder and were clearer,
the structure was good to. Nothing wrong with your verse.
good job.........best line
"To end the confusion i'll make it as clear as i can
i wanna bump up my record
an Rippar here sacrificed self like a true loyal fan."
liked it^^
Rippar - you were allright but not as good as you might have thought, your punches werent really connecting in the way the should have been, get better use of the word play to, you need to elevate in some places, and i wasnt really likein the way you had that stuctured...my opinion...
PM me if you have and qustions or need some help..
V/ Ill
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4th.