Yo start this up....10-15lines
no bitin
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Yo start this up....10-15lines
no bitin
aiight ill spit first you drop 20 minutes after im done
iight...but i dunno if its gonna be 20 mins after u
listen
I see you wanna battle so im givin u the chance
i herd ur flow, u need help, sum1 give him a hand
it was a bad decision to battle me u a dick
now u look stupid like babies born from retarded chicks
nah but for real im havin fun wit u
and nah i aint done wit u
we could meet and u could bring your gun wit u
nah there aint no beef and i dont hate
but u make up words, u belong on killa Cam's label
my man u dont wanna talk gangsta wit StrEETZ black
didnt tell u that they call me warren sapp cuz i got two 9s on my back
aimed right where ur fitted is at
but its over i put u to bed right
if u wanna spit again, find another website.
Holla at your boy StrEETZ......
kid just look at your damn profile, your fuckin gay
your a nerd.. why else would you average 26 post per day
give up the internet BITCH at least get some sense please
you live online.. even your "home" page comes with a "rent" fee
and im a vet, your a newbie, you cant fuckin tempt me
your battle record is like your brain,-non existent and empty
and your a homo, right now, probably got a dick in each jaw
your sex life is like a PAC MAN GAME, cuz all you do is eat balls
you acting like a thugs just a lie cat ya front
your only real affiliations with the streets your life as a bum!
10.
that was iight........every1 who reads this vote on who won the battle......
iight
:)-you wun this battle easily.....you had a better flow...your shit made sence and wasnt jus a bunch of werd....you had some good punches and i think i saw a couple personals in there that hit
streetz-you lost this battle man....your shit was fucked man....only like 4 of your word rhymed and that is a big part tha your verse....your punches didnt hit and your shit was wack man...
v/:)-for a better overall verse and his shit actually rhymed
hit this up plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=123867
i appreciate you takin the time to vote but could you at least drop a poll vote in this battle.. and streetz you dumb fuck.. you posted another name instead of mine.. my username is :) not smiley.. im a have to get a mod to reverse the polls.. fuckin dumbass
I fixed poll.. but um.. yea
drop some votes people.. leave links also if you want
yah...
:)- easily taken playa, better punches, haha funny personal about the posts, good wordplay, home page and rent fee, haha good punch. flow was consistent throughout the verse. overall good verse
streetz- so many people have streetz in it. neway, yah u los it. the flow was off and the rymes werent rymin the whole time. but to give constructive critisism, try not to rap about killing somebody the whole time, its way to played, focus more on good wordplay and structure, but keep it up n practice more.
peace
lol
streets good opening, but u went downhill from there...you were not constant enough to win this join
fuckin smiliy over here took you out to dinner and butt fucked you and streetz was askin for more....thas how this battle looked like.........................................ok maybe it wasnt... got make this entraining
warren sapp cuz i got two 9s on my back
THATS FABOLOUS SHIT BUT I STILL GIV' U THAT VOTE CAUSE IT WAS TIGHT CUZ
STREETZ101
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - ILLunatic
^^ what the hell kind of dickridding vote is that.. that vote is obviously dickridding
uppin for some REAL votes in this battle
streetz- ayo ur verse would be good in da freestyle cypher. u didnt really com at da boi. u had punches, includin da FAB join. but other than that one, ur other punches were soft. u had no personels. som lines didnt even rhyme. ur flow and structure was ass.
:) - ur verse was better because u were really comin at him. ur punches were better. ur personels was a lil goofy (funny). ur structure and flow was better and ur lines rhymed. u came hared that why u get mah vote.
vote: :)
vote for da battles in mah sig!!!!!!!!!!!!!