10-15lines
spit 30-45 mins afta check in
house rules
clock dun start til both check in...
3-0 KO
4-1 TKO
this is mi check in
hummer
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10-15lines
spit 30-45 mins afta check in
house rules
clock dun start til both check in...
3-0 KO
4-1 TKO
this is mi check in
ok
im
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u start first
ill go ater u dun
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talk iz cheap mutherfuker
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here mi shit sorry i had to go to school for an hour......
As I commense yo mind is full of suspense u still dense
Im cummin full force at yo ass fuck u and yo lil hints
This is a one sided battle and ive only spit 2 barz
Insinuatin napalm as i let this bitch meet his maker
Chewin up this fresh meat between wheat
Even if he wuz Westly U still couldnt spit heat
Killin this "no-show" he droppin barz wit "no flow"
Half-Assin shit as I destroy this bitch from Ontario
Im tearin u up like tha tissue that i wipe my ass wit
Cant u see u cant win u stupid ass bitch
This faggot is deminish as i replinsh
U cant even steal a win yet ill call you a Menace
blahh....but all i really need
ok here i go
whos dis guy rappin bout me being a bitch,
all he knows how to do is to make a stich,
you should start cryin like a little baby,
before i cut your head off like crazy,
dont come to close or ill bite,
i think you should stay out of my sight,
dont even think about wearing red,
cos if i see u youll be dead,
dis poof shouldent come near me,
cos all the rappers out ther fear me.
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talk iz cheap mutherfuker
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WOW....i cant poll but i will leave my opinion...
hummer:very basic stuff...no personals...no REAL punches...put together sloppy and nothin made since....just work on everything...maybe think about stuff a lil more before u send it
lyrically-i have seen u come a lot harder but i guess ya kinda figured ya didnt need to in this battle...good for not tryin tho...
vote-Lyricallyhype
hit up my battle against MDR please...
this was a pretty weak battle.. lyricalhype you came in with better flow harder & harder punches. YOu had some good creativity as well as a good vocabulary. YOur structure was alright but fine tuning would have helped. Although, dont just use a big word cause you want to. Make it fit and hit hard. Otherwise your just talkin jibberish to the people who aren't as fluent in english and you may not get the votes from the foreigners. pretty good verse tho! best line was this!
Im tearin u up like tha tissue that i wipe my ass wit
Cant u see u cant win u stupid ass bitch
funny stuff.. cud use some structure work.
Hummer you need to work on many things. You should make each line have about the same amount of syllables otherwise your a fish in a barrel when it comes 2 a battle. You were pretty off flow. Punches werent hitttin hard whatsoever and you used really plain words... multi closer was really weak too man. try and switch up your concepts to have more originality and you will stand more of a chance.
If i could i would
vote - Lyricallyhype
omg.. I wanna cry..lol
lyrical- you came weaker then usual. but wow... there's no way you could have lost this battle, I dont think its physically possible. You had some ok punches in ur verse, some came wack, but thats ok.
hummer- um.. I dont think you had one good or even ok punch in ur verse. Nothing was even a punch. It didn't make sense either... just picked random words to rhyme it together at the ends of lines. Poor.
vote- lyrical
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wackest battle ive seen in mounts
flash- weak shit man your first 2 lines were nice but then i read the rest of your battle and was like.. *ughh* your only real "punchline" was also weak as fuck "Even if he wuz Westly U still couldnt spit heat" wasnt that tight cuz its like what the hell does wesley snipes have to do with heat? anyways you at least had disses in this battle unlike your opponent
hummer-your verse was too short and your wordplay was elementary at best.. it looks like you spent maybe 20 seconds writing that verse.. shit was pathetic.. you had some extremely corny lines like "you should start cryin like a little baby,
before i cut your head off like crazy"
vote- lyrically abusive.. or flash whatever the fuck his name is.. i voted for him in this battle because even thought they were kind of soft.. he at least had disses in this battle.. hummer came so fuckin weak his verse lacked any disses at all.. his shit was too fuckin simple and weak
yo smiley westly snipes came out with a movie i dun remember the name but it was something heat in the title that is why i pu taht there
u said this in your verse ''dont even think about wearing red''
wat' da fuck u a crypt or somethin' i wear red muthafucka so wat' da fuc' u gone do bitch and yo lines was childish get yo young ass off this site and go to sleep little nigga
vote lyrical.............................
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haha. close one. not. lyrcalhype took it like nothing. better everything, even tho it wasn't great. it was still better than hummer's. lame everything from that cat. flow, structure, and even punches were off. ima give this to lyrical for having better everything. props.
vote-lyricalhype
peace
blahhhh
I Can't Vote Yet But Both Of Ya Need 2 Stay Off That Crack
ummm....ugly battle....Lyrical definitly took this though....
both came pretty weak...but Hummer was flat out terrible...
His drop was missing everything u need in a battle verse....
punches, personals, creativity, wit, etc....and was pure filler
peep the help center ASAP...and work on everything...
Lyrical, yer verse wasn't very good either...but it was still
way better than hummer's...u get this because you had the only
punch in the battle...i can see u tried for the personals and punches
but most weren't actually punches and didnt hit....it was also
apparent that you used way more creatvity than yer opponent...
V/ Lyricalhype
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