Cocaina

The farm worker:
Living in Cuba is hard under dictorship
I gotta face it.. no money coming, unless I lace this
If its not in, my hands are chopped off.. I cant take it
I wish I could provide for myself & my family
...goal's are far fetched dreams, wish I could chase it..
All this for just pennies?
The fuck? while the dealer' and boss, ride in bently's..

Farm boss:
Work harder, 7 key's or your a dead farmer
dont breath, pick.. thats all you need
I can kill you and get away with it
*sniff* take this for instance
I cap worker's just for buisness...
Imagine what i'll do to you, if you dont pick this..

Cocaina Leader:
Sit back, while everything get's put in place
cash coming in, and I never gotta chase.
I distrubute, and nothing more...
I say kill, he's already on the floor..
I supply to the demand, but on the other hand..
Im just a worker in this game, it's not like anybody
will ever remember my name..
But maybe it's good in this buisness, to not get fame..

US Drug Distributor:
My cash just hit the tree top's
I aint stoppin till the handle pop's
Money is my dream, and my whole team
is rich, with cream.. we supply to the phene
to the addict's...
Sometime's we gotta kill, but that's just the advantage...

Drug Dealer:
Got the glock in my belt, cat's get delt
im the wind, and that's the breeze u just felt
Got the Yayo, my squad is all fatal
you aint got the cash, it's your last day yo
I snort off my own supply, and I aint stable..
Just gimmie the money, and your ok-yo

cool theme...it was interesting enough i guess...

thought the flow was a little choppy in places... maybe it just needs another read through...

the vocab was real low... a bit too low for me... and usually i don't care...

some of the rhymes i jus wasn't feelin... maybe it's in the read...

Up your multis work on some complexity in the structure mix and...

all will elevate... keep it up

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