Verses Due: Tuesday February 3rd, 2004
Voting Ends: Saturday February 9th, 2004
Topic: Hold On Tight
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Verses Due: Tuesday February 3rd, 2004
Voting Ends: Saturday February 9th, 2004
Topic: Hold On Tight
holding....
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Dedicated to my Granda Louise...For reason's UnEmceeable knows of...
Change comes in time, it's an inevitable fact of life
It causes so much agony, it leads to so much strife
And if you wait long enough, change will happen, it's true
But if you wait for change, it may not catch up to you
Because people change, and you want them to change back overnight
But you may be in for the fight of your life, you may want to hold on tight
Life is never what it seems, lies are among us all
Whether they deceive, or it's a bluff that you can easily call
Secrets buried in the closet rarely get to be revealed
People want to deal on their own, so secrets stay concealed
Jackie was just like many, had troubles with her spouse
Yells often echoed through the hollowed walls of the house
Punches often flew, but all of them were at her
But she held on tight, she was a better fighter
4 Months Later
Cops were finally called in,they thought it was for the best
Jackie never understood, it felt like a slug to her chest
She cashed in her savings for him to be able to make bail
And all the great things she did, seemed to be of no avail
All he could see was that it was her fault, he hit her with a bottle of beer
And if he had wanted to see who was really at fault, he just had to go to a mirror
She stayed through the punches, and she lasted the night
She was quite the fighter, she just held on tight
Change
She thought he could change, it was a matter of time
"Things'll get better, and he'll be back to being mine"
But beatings continues and court appearences would ensue
But he always got bail, and Jackie let the cycle continue
Til one time the fighting knocked her into submission
If only Jackie's choices had gotten some revision
And in the hospital, on life support she sits and continues her fight
Not knowing what tomorrow will bring, not being able to hold on tight
Change comes in time, it's an inevitable fact of life
It causes so much agony, it leads to so much strife
And if you wait long enough, change will happen, it's true
But if you wait for change, it may not catch up to you
Because people change, and you want them to change back overnight
But you may be in for the fight of your life, you may want to hold on tight
Left and Right
In and Out
Hold on Tight
Left and Right
In And Out
Hold on Tight
Hold On Tight to suds
Bubbles that clean and stuff
In the shower use the power
Use the sweet to clean the sour
And hold on tight, With all your might
Cuz if you drop the bar
……….You’ll be someone’s bitch tonight
Unfavorable Outcome:
You let the Ivory slip and skip
To pick it up
And end up with a dick in your butt
Your body is tight…as your Mind grips
The reality of rape
And how it feels like taking a shit
Dropping a monster the size of a baseball mitt
But your catching less than feelings
Your dealing with a sealant
That in the end could prove too much to bare
Cuz when shit and seamen stick
It could probably tear off your ass hair
So your holding on tight to the wall
Hoping when he’s done that’s all
A tall thin man…..stronger than you
Not a minute man…and lasts longer than you
Off your pain he feeds
As your asshole bleeds
Hasn’t torn much…but he lays seeds
The size of corn nuts………………
Wow!
Sorry Mad Man…I just didn’t have time this week
lmao...funny shit. :\ u have a sick and twisted
mind to let me visualize ur lines tho. so u are
to never post that again :) and the world will not
end.
v/o
mad.
more thought through.
whoa............incredably dissapointed that i wasted valuable seconds of my life reading that second verse......tha breakdown:
Mad - rhyme scheme- 6.5, story- 8.5, flow- 6.5, total- 21.5
a solid drop from you.......you easily took it, work on rhyme scheme
Defcon- rhyme scheme- 6, story- 2, flow- 6, total- 14
you shouldnt have posted this........sorry man, but this was pointless
vote- obviously mad man, no hard feelins, vote on my ish, peace, 1
V/ Mad Man
Good piece mad....nice story...good wordplay ou won for obvious reasons
lol at wm'd verse.....
that was gay...and dumb
Mad Man took this easily with a real verse...
Something deep, heartfelt, and meaningful.
WTF were you thinking, Def?
Better everything from Madman...
Do I need to delve further into this explanation?
If so, PM me.
Peace
^^
lmao...
I just didn't want to no-show for Mad Man's sake...he spent all the time I didn't have
Yeah...
Vote: Mad Man
Mad Man wins