yo lets do 10-15 lines
blind spits like you said..
i will most likely put my shit up first cause i have to run in a little while..lets make this nice.. :thefinger
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yo lets do 10-15 lines
blind spits like you said..
i will most likely put my shit up first cause i have to run in a little while..lets make this nice.. :thefinger
Shit.... I forgot about this...
I'll post something up later 2nite
Z's throwing cabbages.. but lettuice ain't tha only thing he tosses
Know why he ain't showing his rec? Cuz Z had 0 wins and 5 losses
Ain't making fun of tha dude..but hey..competition wasn't an excuse
I'd say face people ya own level.. But Z battled nothing but n00bs!
Fuck insurance.. Ben making this chicken duck mo times than Afflack
And that shit u spit's literally crap..spewed straight from tha ass crack
26 years old with a 0-5 record? Just gotta say.. don't quit ya day job
You're beaten by basics.. cuz ya talents smaller than most spit wods
Evelation's at ground zero.. never going up.. and there you shall die
His custom text is a lie.. gave Z Hermes sandals.. and still wasn't fly
Ya confused! got about as much chance of making sense as plastic cans
Tha only time I seen you underground.. was viewing ya casket plans
Speaking tha truth.. when I say ya flow's went rotten.. I'm telling it
No one remembers you.. Make Zarbon tha lost and forgotten element
No feeding... If you don't get tha punches... don't vote
Waiting for you...................
Hurry up and drop ya shit
yo i cant post till later tonight,,my bad dude :thefinger
You in this forum..
Spit ya prewritten shit...
Hurry up..
yo wise my bad on this,i forgot about it...
Everythin ya spit is false, let me show you foo
Ya weakness lies in ya verse, and so do you
So how do I bring straight facts about a lie’n homo
If wise got the initial win,you must mean via No Show
this herb is nervous, just a nerd who’s worthless
and if you’re my reason for livin, ima serve my purpose
In text yo shit is weak your scared making a pain for it
Ya soil you pants so much,you added water n created a rain forest
I promise...I swear it...I'll show what damagin lines do
If there's shadow of doubt,it's prolly wise standin behind you
wise sucks dick, a fag that's tired, n he's an awful disgrace
So I give em a towel, just to take a load off.... of his face
You are weak,n put up fights,though your a lil fraile bastard
wise always have drama in hand... like unprepared actors
Sorry your mother didn't want you, lemme put it in actions
She spent more hours in labor, pushing... you back in
Fact is people were lying when they were bluffing you should
Be happy,you're not good for nothing you'll just be nothing... for good
ok so you said 10-15 and spit 18 lines......maybye you shoulda read that...which kinda fishy makes me think its pre written...nut lets just sayits not...you still lost wise ways had way better personals punches and vocab....zarbon you had nice wordplay but for real i wasn't feeling the punches ......so you lost becase you came to soft next time try to be in the zone and spit when you say you will....wonner wise ways ..hit this up....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109696
Yeah... You didn't follow ya own rule....
10-15...And you spit 18....
Did seem a lil prewritten..
considering tha fact there was no personals
#1
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Originally Posted by Wise Ways
yeah true..no lies,i had some of it for ya ,but i forgot about this battle my bad take the win if you want it like that..
This Was A Nice Battle But Wise Took It Easily With The Punches,Wordplay,Vocab Etc..
VOTE=WISE WAYS
Return Da Favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109032
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109612
..........................#2
..........Vote please
Z's throwing cabbages.. but lettuice ain't tha only thing he tosses
Know why he ain't showing his rec? Cuz Z had 0 wins and 5 losses
Ain't making fun of tha dude..but hey..competition wasn't an excuse
I'd say face people ya own level.. But Z battled nothing but n00bs!
Fuck insurance.. Ben making this chicken duck mo times than Afflack
And that shit u spit's literally crap..spewed straight from tha ass crack
26 years old with a 0-5 record? Just gotta say.. don't quit ya day job
You're beaten by basics.. cuz ya talents smaller than most spit wods
Evelation's at ground zero.. never going up.. and there you shall die
His custom text is a lie.. gave Z Hermes sandals.. and still wasn't fly
Ya confused! got about as much chance of making sense as plastic cans
Tha only time I seen you underground.. was viewing ya casket plans
Speaking tha truth.. when I say ya flow's went rotten.. I'm telling it
No one remembers you.. Make Zarbon tha lost and forgotten element
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yea umm this was really good,i prefer 10 lines but 14 i guess is cool too
so i give this a 9/10 cuz evry piece can be improved a lil more k
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Everythin ya spit is false, let me show you foo
Ya weakness lies in ya verse, and so do you
So how do I bring straight facts about a lie’n homo
If wise got the initial win,you must mean via No Show
this herb is nervous, just a nerd who’s worthless
and if you’re my reason for livin, ima serve my purpose
In text yo shit is weak your scared making a pain for it
Ya soil you pants so much,you added water n created a rain forest
I promise...I swear it...I'll show what damagin lines do
If there's shadow of doubt,it's prolly wise standin behind you
wise sucks dick, a fag that's tired, n he's an awful disgrace
So I give em a towel, just to take a load off.... of his face
You are weak,n put up fights,though your a lil fraile bastard
wise always have drama in hand... like unprepared actors
Sorry your mother didn't want you, lemme put it in actions
She spent more hours in labor, pushing... you back in
Fact is people were lying when they were bluffing you should
Be happy,you're not good for nothing you'll just be nothing... for good
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this had 18 lines and the flow wasnt all that great,shorten ya lines
and use like 10 really hard ones instead of just scattering them skills
overall 7 1/2/10 ratio on this verse........................
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vote/Wise Ways
WW
obviuosly took this battle
he shud stop battleyn Newbs Cuz his record his fake..really
just a bunch of wins of newbs..
but us till take my vote cuz u battle newbs all day..if u battled me or competiion like meud get ya ass tore up/
Vo-te ww
Hit the lnik i left an Read sum real skillz an vote..pc
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109536
though i hate this bitch so fucking much but im going to drop the beef for one second and see what i think............
Flow:both....
strucuture>>>>><<<Punches>ww...more witty shit from him
personals::ww...none from the other due...if im just tired or i dont see any...
multis...bla...
overall:ww.....he cmae harder in my eyese....no hate....at least drop the beef for 2 mins and hit my battles up....thx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109693
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109699
no hate just honest opinion on what i read....WOW i actually voted my enemy....i must be tired