let's run it, you first
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let's run it, you first
this is my response to his first
cause the first thread wasn't the one for the battle and that's where he post his rhyme at, i crushed him, so he or she or whatever you are can write a new one if you want to, it don't matter to me
yo,
you ok put you ain't nice/ im willing to fight for keys so i'll murder you type
you bitch, you mention my name you sucking dick,/ when i spit, im making you sick im hurting you brain,/
look that word "NOBODY" then look at your name,
what the fuck is a rantis, faggit you fake rabbit / im shitting on you badly lyrical diaria
how you dare call me tongue and cheek, when you was the one that spit that wack ass rap that showed you sweet,
you taking a L, and i don't mean stealing some weed
im killing you dog, wit eaz, if you know how to read, / you dummy
taking you pride, like take you money,/ "im hungry "
you tryna be funny, i'll bugs you bunny,"i'll crush you dog,/ you nothing but a ant to me,/i'll crush the king the queen or who ever you be
so, take this loss, confess to the pope, / that iLLman cut on my in my sins, i thought is was dope
you ain't fucking wit, "who's next"
I rapped first when this bitch set up the battle wrong. I said no biting my verse and all he did was make punches off mine. Any way here it is...
ok, this dudes profile is hard, he acting like some sort of professional,
its not even questionable that im gonna leave this dude lookin like a human vegetable,
so take my sins like the pope at my confessional,
ur rhymes are snacked on while mine are hardly edible,
through my mouth and lips i pack the heat, ur style is tongue and cheek, while im "mighty" like "sheek", so hard i only gotta be on this bitch once a week to stay fresh
on the streets, im messy as fuck with bodies but with u ill be a neat freak
u claim to be ill but im the sick one when i rap,
u cum like with u do with the ladies, so soft she cant spit back
on my computer ur almost as annoying as everyday spam mail,
u the type to pay ur own family to send u fan mail
his whole life this 20 yr. old has been censored to rapping
what happened?, i just shitted on u but ill just say i was crapping
i ain't bite your verse, "it's a response dog",
"we battling," i ain't one of these fake mcee's, i do this shit for a living
UPPIN FOR VOTES
im just saying in our rules we said "blind spit" and that way i cant feed of urs and u couldnt do the same. advantages are to the person who writes second otherwise. and if u do this for a living i am sorry to hear that b/c u obviously arent living well.
whoo dis was type hott...let me break dis shit down
ill- ya shit was type hott dunn..but u aint really have no punches or no bars dat really stood out and ya verse a lil plain but it was good but dat rabbit was real dumb dogg u cant say dat in a battle
b.rantis- ya shit was better overal...ya bars ryhmed better and ya punches hit harder than ill's shit ya flow was good..
flow-rantis
punches-rantis
creativity-rantis
my vote=b.rantis.....i think he shit was a better battle verse overal....no hate 2 illman ya shit was good dunn
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107960
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107533
^^^^there go da links my battles rite...can ya niggaz vote on wun or both since i did ya'll a favor and voted on ya shit ..goodlookin WUN!
this was an ok battle, my votes gotes to B. rantis tho...
His verse was better, much better punchlines first of all. ILLman...a lot of your stuff didn't punch right, it sounded like you were just throwing stuff in there for the sake of adding multies...which really hurt your verse. B. rantis is also awarded with structre. iLLman is awarded with flow...even though his shit makes no sense. Overall, B. rantis took more categoies and had a much better verse.
vote- B. rantis
return the favour, both of you, by dropping honest votes on my battles please. thank you.
stop lieing, you ain't saying nothin about no blind spit,
blind spit or no blind spit, i'll still murder you anyway so whats the difference
" what you wanta do it over ", or take your L on the chin
" it's up to you dog, it don't matter to me "
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108356
how about u re-read our bitch slapped discussion
nah u didnt follow the rules but i murdered this illman
u would lose everytime so fuck doing this again
upppin for votes............................................. ...........lets go ppl
illman u had some stretched out lines and i wasnt felling your flow at all ur starter eas poor b rantis had the better punches ands he had good creatvitiy, illman you need 2 elevate cos ur shit made no sense at all 2 me
Yea.. even though I can't poll yet, i'll give u all my insights on this battle here...
I think both of you cna be better then what you posted here. ILL honest, no lie.. it was pretty hard to understand alot of ur verse.. what does a rabbit have to do with diaria?? -- Dont get it.. had okay flow though. no hate man i cna tell you got some talent. My honest vote has to go to rantis, had better everything else basically besides the flow. His punches were nicer (can be better), but its cool though cause I think u got this battle.
vote - rantis
Everyone reading this come check out my battles.. return the favor. please.
Check out my signature for the links ***
iLLman DQed for having more than 2 active battles up at a time.
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