Aight, 10 lines min.,20 lines max.
Blind spit within the next two hours.
Peace.
MARVOLoUsJ1009
Whigga Spitta
Aight, 10 lines min.,20 lines max.
Blind spit within the next two hours.
Peace.
Yo i hope you prepared for lyrical assassaination
cuz i flow like female menstruation
you spit nasty-- only cuz you practice oral masturbation
sure you Marvolous, at anal penetration
you better check da station before you rep yo nation
I spit harshly, cuz it's whigga you facin'
my weed is laced in
PCP and crack, but they'll never trace 'em
back to me cuz all my tracks, i erase 'em
from the ones on my arm, to the coke in my basement
i'm 17, spittin shit is my teenage wasteland
jea!!
Listen...white boy since u wanna play me and spark //
da beam on da 3 80 is dark,i'll leave ya spline in ya green avey & ya lady in dark //
u not nice dogg u just ""OLD AND GASSED"" like u ""80 AND FART"" //
be serious ya bars is trash u couldn't ""BEAT ME"" if u gave me ya ""HEART"" //
beef with jay fagget i'll be in ya hood squeezin-glocks //
i'll catch u in ya wip & put ya ""CHEST ON YA BRAKES"" just da make ya ""BREATHIN STOP"" //
....can we get some votes
i know u gota feel like da ""ODD"" 1 on rap battles cuzz u aint ""EVEN"" hott //
look unda my name fagget u should know im commin-sick //
prick if u blingin runnin it quick,cuzz da gun and clipp //
a leave u with ""FOOD 4 THOUGHT"" when i put ya ""BRAIN"" where ya ""STOMACH"" sit //
good battle, but i think whigga got this one,
cause he had better punches, and better flow,
went good together, marvolousyou had some aight
punches but whigga got you.
ima give this to whigga.
since i took my time on this vote on youngthug619 vs Karmic
lmaooooooooooo whut battle is u lookin at dogg better wow...datz a hate vote cuzz i voted 4 tilleye and u got t.k.oed its nothin tho..uppin 4 votes
muthafuckin uppin yo why ya niggaz dont vote.....but ya want nigaaz da vote on ya'll shit whuts good rapbattles get at us with some votes...its 0-0
Thats newb for ya...............
Whigga- Your verse was pretty weak showed no real complex punches or creative meta's. The only thing you had going was flow an it was just very basic
Marv- Pretty decent drop. You had some very creative punches. Overall good verse
OVERALL-Marv takes this one easy overall more complex an better punches
Return the favor an hit my battle up with a vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107516
Thanks
okay datz a real ass vote goodlookin out dunn.....now can we get some more real votes on dis shit and ima peep ya battle dunn
uppppppppppppinnnnnnnnn........................... ..................................................
i guess i win cuzz niggaz aint fuckin votin............................................. .............
yo i voted on madd niggaz battles........................................... ......................return da fuckin favor
Yo, this battle was pretty close.. saw some things I was liking on both of ur verse. Think u both can elevate it a little bit though. Overal decent battle..
Marv. You had some nice punches that stood out to me.. structure was a little hard to read it right.. flow was..... okay.. creativity was alot better then whiggas.
Whigga, I liked your flow alot better. structure was better. I say you got beat with the punches and he had some more creativity. no hate.
Overall vote - Marv
Lets return the favor on this.. check out my battle. please. peace
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...46#post1108246
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damn marv sucked balls, ya disin on wigga spitta cus he white and actually spits sumin a person can read. and the only reason u gettin votes is cus u herassin foos and they bitch asses for votin for shit.
vote-wigga spitta
by the way u cant win if u ryme fart with "HEART" yo asses is dumb thats a well know rule
^^^ummmm fart and heart ryhme u fuckin dick head.......but aneway im up 2-0 yo comrok i got u dun ima peep ya battle
Yo i hope you prepared for lyrical assassaination
cuz i flow like female menstruation
{b] i expected more with this opening.. follow through didnt hit much, no real punch there, played concept onthe follow through[/b]
you spit nasty-- only cuz you practice oral masturbation
sure you Marvolous, at anal penetration
follow through line was sorta of a weak punch.. directed, and was an iight personal
you better check da station before you rep yo nation
I spit harshly, cuz it's whigga you facin'
filler... Not much of a punch or metaphor... just somthing to add bars i suppose
my weed is laced in
PCP and crack, but they'll never trace 'em
again filler
back to me cuz all my tracks, i erase 'em
from the ones on my arm, to the coke in my basement
theres no punch here
I'm 17, spittin shit is my teenage wasteland
not diggin this ending, it was a filler..
Your lacking metaphors and punchs... Your verse wasnt directed to your opponent. It flowed well ya but it didnt really contend well as a battle verse..
Listen...white boy since u wanna play me and spark //
da beam on da 3 80 is dark,i'll leave ya spline in ya green avey & ya lady in dark //
{b] opening was alright... Not really directed punchs though[/b]
u not nice dogg u just ""OLD AND GASSED"" like u ""80 AND FART"" //
be serious ya bars is trash u couldn't ""BEAT ME"" if u gave me ya ""HEART"" //
the wordplay on this is iight.. Meta is straight... the punchs was ok
beef with jay fagget i'll be in ya hood squeezin-glocks //
i'll catch u in ya wip & put ya ""CHEST ON YA BRAKES"" just da make ya ""BREATHIN STOP"" //
the follow through is over drawn, the punch is kind of weak, but your meta is ok
....can we get some votes
i know u gota feel like da ""ODD"" 1 on rap battles cuzz u aint ""EVEN"" hott //
look unda my name fagget u should know im commin-sick //
eh, sort of a play concept with the odd even part.. punch could have been in there a little more
prick if u blingin runnin it quick,cuzz da gun and clipp //
a leave u with ""FOOD 4 THOUGHT"" when i put ya ""BRAIN"" where ya ""STOMACH"" sit //
you follow through would have come off ill if you used a little re wording.. ending is ok.. decent verse.
You had alright metaphors/wordplay.. flow was overdrawn at parts.. punchs were ok, could have worked on more personals..
Vote- MarvolousJwun009
His punchs took it, he came with more, flow was kind of off but made up for it with his metas
Peep the battle and drop an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107825
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