.:FreemaN:. (10-3) vs Neek(0-0)

10 lines mini 15 max
No biting,swaying,dicking,hating,recycling
due at 7 30 january 19th
I'll drop first and good luck

yo... its already 10:50pm 19th January here... In England man...

its 10 lines only... no more, no less...

iight?

well ive done my verse....


checkin in....

you can spit, then i'll drop right after a see youve dropped...

10 LINES ONLY

ok lmfao!!!!......Have it due by i guess 11 30 there...heres my verse

I'll be 'Up front' even 'Backwards' Neek-is-Keen,This demon-brings,heat to make singular numbers from even-teams!/
You're battling a kid who's fuckin'-ruthless,remove your spirit and glue it externally....Now you're stuck-on-stupid./
i heard you like lumber and know it Damn-good, so when i beat you with branch's at 'dawn'..You'll notice the 'am'-bush/
Dawg you'll be clinging limbs-at-hospitals, if you think a win-is-optional, cause truthfully neek's pen-is-off-the-wall/
Neeks so eager-to-eat-ya, he'll cause your femur-to-seizure, as you pray and cross your fingers-for-rebirth/

Cant do much with 10 lines =/...There ya go man

Battlin this newb... little bitch goes by the name of Neek
Congratulations... you've jus started on your losing streak
Your laying down the rules, What?, you think your a vet
Your just a nobody, nothin, you dont deserve any respect
This kid here, yes him^, the one obsessed wiv his multi's that are wack
Here's a present, 'You Jus Got Merked By Freeman', Even wrote it on a plaque
Well Done! Should be proud, your coming up to your tenth post
You think youve achieved... But it aint nothin to boast
How can you try and diss me when your a mother fuckin cripple
Your such a lightweight, even if threw you in a pond...
... you wouldnt make a ripple

flow- freeman
punchlines- freeman
structure- neek
overalll vote- freeman

yo hit this battle up with a vote.. heres the link http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108219

Hmmm..........o...k......Uppin for more votes please...

smh

nice battle...neek to the wordplay and the multis for sure and i bet he's from a site where that is how you win a battle...sadly though not here neek...you need punches and you had more like 1 good punch but i like some of your metas...freeman you need to get more creative with you punches you like last two bars won it for you and you barely dropped those the top was mostly filler cause it was a weak punch...so i mean no hate just create a bit more both y'all hit these up...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108225

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107655

yeah i can see that doesnt win battles here,and i dont like it...but oh well =/

iight... two people have voted... yet only one has polled... one of ya poll ur vote for me liked u said^...

was that verse pre-written Neek?

uppin #1

Nah..jus quick written cuz i had another battle due up

*just poll voted*.. yeah man thats a nice dirty trick.. im seing more and more dudes using it.. lol.. peace

FREEMAN took this he had the vital punches, structure and flow..was bouncein in my seat.....neek took the multis but as said above it wasnt enough to take out FREEMANS hard hittin punches.

VOTE = FREEMAN
hit this up with a honest vote plz its getting slept on

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107828

wtf...he voted against me in my other battle too...thats typical dickride...2-0 still

fuckin poll

neek

I'll be 'Up front' even 'Backwards' Neek-is-Keen,This demon-brings,heat to make singular numbers from even-teams!/<--i dont know about this opener i liked it...not bad

You're battling a kid who's fuckin'-ruthless,remove your spirit and glue it externally....Now you're stuck-on-stupid./<---ok....

i heard you like lumber and know it Damn-good, so when i beat you with branch's at 'dawn'..You'll notice the 'am'-bush/<--didnt really like this couplet here...

Dawg you'll be clinging limbs-at-hospitals, if you think a win-is-optional, cause truthfully neek's pen-is-off-the-wall/<---ok...

Neeks so eager-to-eat-ya, he'll cause your femur-to-seizure, as you pray and cross your fingers-for-rebirth/<--blah at this ending not liking it..


freeman

Battlin this newb... little bitch goes by the name of Neek
Congratulations... you've jus started on your losing streak<--ok opener could have came harder witha better punch...

Your laying down the rules, What?, you think your a vet
Your just a nobody, nothin, you dont deserve any respect<--ok...

This kid here, yes him^, the one obsessed wiv his multi's that are wack
Here's a present, 'You Jus Got Merked By Freeman', Even wrote it on a plaque<--not feeling it..

Well Done! Should be proud, your coming up to your tenth post
You think youve achieved... But it aint nothin to boast<--ok again..

How can you try and diss me when your a mother fuckin cripple
Your such a lightweight, even if threw you in a pond...
... you wouldnt make a ripple<--cool,ending not hard hitting but won it for ya...

vote freeman..i felt it didnt flow as well as neeks did but neek had the flow and multis..but freeman had more punches..not hard hitting ones but won this battle ...