Dr. Punch
aiight ten line battle. no hate votes.. no dickridding votes. and no crew votes.. you have 40 minutes to drop your verse after checkin in. if you dont drop a verse within 40 minute of checking in. you will be branded a no show and loss via DQ
if you agree with these rules check in.. and ohh ill spit first also
Dr.Punch
Check Check............................................. .................................................. ..
aiight you got till 5:06 in which to drop.. ill drop before 40 minutes also.. peace
its hazardous the way i leave your VERSE LAYERS BROKE,
and the way my WORDS SLAY YOUR THROAT
dude, only NERDS SAY YOUR QUOTES
your fuckin rhmyes read like something a FIRST GRADER WROTE
and your wackness is what your record SHOWS AN PROVES
cuz your last 2 battles of yours were against RB's worst FLOWIN DUDES
and the result of that is that your now 0 AN 2 - hahaha
i mean your the type of dude that i say are PAST WACK
cuz you come more than HALF ASSED
your fuckin RAPS HAVE,
the intelligence of a dude that just inhaled MASS CRACK
through a STRAPPED JACK of a GAS MASK
ripped!
......
...
...I'm Leavin' You Delirious, Punches Ruining That Spree...**
...Puttin Your Name To Shame, U Cant Change This Game...
...Leavin' You Paralyzed, Can't Move Like A Picture Frame...
...Checking Your Wins List, Name One Vet That You've Beat...***
...As I Edit My Sig, Adding You As My First Counterfeit Elite...
...Its Like Your Fists Are Excreted Cuz Your Punches Aint Reaching...
...Im Untouchable, Settin It Up Against Me? You Need Some Teaching...
...Having You Worried, Yes I Know It's Almost Five Oh Six O' Clock****...
...Tick Tock, Yo Lifetime Ticking, Leaving You In Shock, *Loads Glock*...
...*= He Set It Up Havin A Smiley Bullet Shooting At My Name*...
...**= He Has A 8 In A Row Winning Spree**...
...***= He Hasnt Beat One Vet***...
...****= My Due Tyme Is At 5:06****....
...And Don't Vote For Him Just Because He Can Hit Your Battle Up...
...5:06 P.M.,
Weak battle
Vote - Smiley
Punches: Smiley
Wordplay: Neither
Multis: Smiley
Personals: Dr
Opener: Smiley
Closer: Smiley
Dr. Punch, why are you rhyming about when you are dropping? You had a lot of filler, and weren't direct. Smiley had some nice punches, fucked up scheme tho.
dude, only NERDS SAY YOUR QUOTES
your fuckin rhmyes read like something a FIRST GRADER WROTE
Best bar of the battle.
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
hahahaha.. hey yo uppin this for votes man ..........
Please return the favor in one of my battles, sorry for the freepost.
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
umm dis battle was aight but da smiley face nigga got dis real easy...
flow-smiley
punches-
wordplay-
creativity-
my vote was for dr.
breakdown
flow dr
struture dr
punches tie
vocab smiley
metas tie
both ya'll really need to elevate. ya'll should start a group together.
Vote gone.
-Axe
Last edited by Axe; January 19th, 2004 at 06:47 PM
Ja'e Roc Entertainment 2004
lo^^^l my badd i click da enter be4 i broke da shit down...
flow-smiley
punches-smiley...real easy dat line with da nerds shit took it
creativity-smiley....dr.punch change ya name dogg 4 real...
my vote-smiley....he had a betta overall verse...and his punches was good
return da favor....reall vs marvolousj1009 or whigga spitta vs marvolousj1009
that vote doesnt count.............................
who's????????................................nigga i broke my shit down good enuff...............and it was 4 u
dude, only NERDS SAY YOUR QUOTES
your fuckin rhmyes read like something a FIRST GRADER WROTE
^^ FUCKIN "SLAYD HIS THROAT" wit that line
you get 0 points for rappin about how much time until you drop
that fucked everything up and your shit wasnt even rhymin
both had shitty structure but smiley was creative and witty
dr punch just sounded recycled
so overall- dr punch get a new occupation
VOTE/ SMILEY!
hit the my battles up, the links are in my signature!
aiight uppin this for more votes...................................
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