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Inevitable Return
Like my scrotum here it is in a nutshell,
One thousand nine hundred and seventy-two,
That's the year I got here when my dear mother's water blew,
Not really realizing the prize that's been begot to her,
The bona fide lo-fi high-octane philosopher,
Genius with a penis the few the proud the me,
I liked me so much I had to buy the company,
Soul for sale sold to Satan for a hell of a lotta luck,
I'm hard to come by like a straight guy working at Starbucks,
Thank the thinkers that think they thunk the thoughts that theorized,
Idolized or despised bet I'm gettin' recognized,
Mount Rushmore it? No ignore it can't rock with no big head,
Half of the people want me half of the people want me dead,
I am the Angel of Def with my rhymes against humanity,
Teeter-tottering between brilliance and insanity,
The one part the Fuehrer the one part the Pope,
It's the inevitable return baby of the Great White Dope,
Conclusions you drew proportions you blew,
Lost son of Iggy, False Bigger nose than Ziggy, True,
Yes my name is Jimmy Pop no my pop's name is Dick,
Don't admit to kick it slick you thick derelict critic,
Put down for missed notes put up with misquotes,
Don't want the whole story? Should have bought the Cliff Notes,
Like Fingerpainting 101 give me no credit for having class,
One thumb on the pulse of the nation one thumb in your girlfriend's ass,
Written on written off scoff callin' me a joke,
I don't think that I'm a sell-out but I do "Enjoy Coke!",
I struck gold but never took it for granite that's how I planned it so can it,
Around the planet fans demand it and you'll never understand it,
When I die no lie plan on mass pandemonium,
They may display my brain in a pickle jar at the Smithsonian,
The one part the Fuehrer the one part the Pope,
It's the inevitable return baby of the Great White Dope.
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You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
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"I'm hard to come by like a straight guy working at Starbucks," haha liked that line but ur joint took so crazy thurs first it was bout u bein born then ur moms and then u hit on some weird lines ne ways keep practicin fam abstracts ight but i like content better
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now THIS is how you do a boasting piece, some great one-liners and imagery in here. the first line had me cracking up. your subject matter was all over the place but it worked well in the context of the piece. you had strong vocab as well. just a great little rap to spit to a group i think
good work, keep posting.
p.s. and i have to be arsehole and ask: could you rep one of my pieces? people are sleeping like this forum gives out complimentary pillows.
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^^nice sig. iraq missles?
ill leave links to feedback i post. and check yours.
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Soul for sale sold to Satan for a hell of a lotta luck,
I'm hard to come by like a straight guy working at Starbucks
I am the Angel of Def with my rhymes against humanity,
Teeter-tottering between brilliance and insanity
yo i thought those lines are off the hook man that shitis tight nice job be lookin round for you in the future
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Haha, this shit was real ill.. one of the better bragging type pieces i've seen here.. lots of quotables.. this how the shit should be done.. note to everyone.. if you want to brag, take a note from this kid.. flow was on-point.. this type of flow will make a writer jealous.. not me tho, haha.. structure was off, but the flow remained consistent, surprisingly..
Soul for sale sold to Satan for a hell of a lotta luck,
I'm hard to come by like a straight guy working at Starbucks,
Put down for missed notes put up with misquotes,
Don't want the whole story? Should have bought the Cliff Notes,
Like Fingerpainting 101 give me no credit for having class,
One thumb on the pulse of the nation one thumb in your girlfriend's ass,
Written on written off scoff callin' me a joke,
I don't think that I'm a sell-out but I do "Enjoy Coke!",
When I die no lie plan on mass pandemonium,
They may display my brain in a pickle jar at the Smithsonian,
^^ All dope as hell.. i'm impressed.. good piece, PaYce.
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da shit was funny man keep droppin
