aight here da rules
10 lines
u spit first
both check in
no hate votes
no dick ryding votes
no 1 line votes
explained votes
aight good luck hommie...
Jo-JO
Remixed Illusion
aight here da rules
10 lines
u spit first
both check in
no hate votes
no dick ryding votes
no 1 line votes
explained votes
aight good luck hommie...
now checking in so excuse me as i lyrically vomit
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pz and good luck
k i'll have my verse in by tonite,
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dont no show Jo-JO
pz
Im not sure if youve ever been introduced to your self so sit and ponder
At the age of seventeen had more than one foster parent forced to wonder
Only parental figure in your stereo typical rich livin, subarb dwelling, spoiled life
eminem and now wit a unmeaningful and degrading remix cauzed him strif
Now uv been mislead that ur the next eminem only with less skill and more girlie flow
You think you can sit up here with my elevation and share in my spot light show
You put shame on the white mans heritage I understand why ur remix illusionist
Cuz ur under the illusion that you have some sort of high level skill that ur the illest
You have little flow experience in textual territory so what if posts close to 140
The only thing you post about is your lazy potato couch ways provin ur a shorty
Last rhyme u wrote wasn't even ur own I wonder what parts of my style will be shown
Im sorry my mans but seems the waivering illusion you call ur spots ben blown
Time for me to leave cuz for sure I will always hold my own
I know we strangers, but u can call me ur jaw re-arranga//
u can hold up both ya middle finga, but in a fight i still tha winna//
i'll leave u roasted, like cooked beef, and leave u on tha table like done dinna//
so listen up Jo-JO, i'ma bust in slo-mo, i'ma go slow, to bust my flow//
it goes to show that i blow hard when flow, feel me when i explode//
let my lyrical waves do tha work to erode this ho, like Joe Shmoe//
this is fantastic, cuz my lyrics are electricuting u like a 1000w of statik//
u need ta practice, cuz my atttack tatiks are wrappin u in plastic//
i'm put a new meaning to tha big bang theory when i blow u up//
cuz i'm explodin wit punches and chewin u up, i'm goin hard that i bust ya nut//
i dont give a fuck, but i'll make this JO glow like ET's finga, so he can go home//
look i'm bustin up ya dome, crackin ya cranium, cuz i'm solid like titanium//
i sliced this herb like he was a vegetable
left him like a handicap, stupid and disabled
aight lets get sum votes on this muh'fukka
UPPIN 1 lets get sum votes up on this muh'fukka.
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uppin yo'z
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don sleep on this shit
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pz
Breakdown:
Punches: RI (Close, Jo had some nice Illusion shi')
Flow: RI (Jo's too stretched out)
Creativity: RI (Titanium line was ill)
Vocab: RI (Titanium)
Enjoyment: RI (Jo didn' come hard enough)
Opener: Niether (Both weak)
Closer: Jo-Jo (RI's vegtable diable shi' didn' ryhme)
Personals: Definetly Jo-Jo
Overall: Remixed Illusion
Yo, nice battle propz ta both...ya both need ta elevate wit ya structure 'n punches tho...
Thanx hommie Uppin 2 for sum votes on this muh'fukka
UPPIN HOMMIES and don forget to poll vote boiz
pz
Punches: jo jo
Flow: RI
Creativity: RI
Vocab: RI Enjoyment: RI
Opener: RI
Closer: Jo-Jo
Personals: jo jo
gonna give this battle to the man i like to call...because thats his name illisionist..something...jk breakdown
punches...Not illisoionist- jojo
personals...jojo
structure..illusionist...
flow- Illusionist..
opener-illusionist..
closer-jojo
overall - illusionist
hit up the link thanx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...88#post1000888
INSANE JOKA LYRICIST
I cant vote yet aint got enuf posts so ill jus say hu go my vote.d winner is Remixed Illusion but i have 1 complaint u talk about blowing 2 much.// Peace.// drop a vote on my battle//
Aight Thanx Hommies, lets get sum more votes in on this muh'fukka. and don forget to poll vote when u post boiz.
UPPIN 3 UPPIN.
pz
REMIXED ILLUSION:
Opener:JJ(both need work)
Flow:RI
Punches:RI
Structre:Both
Closer:RI (same as opener)
RI, I liked your metaphors and multi they were pretty good. Your structure was ok but the closing was kinda weak your flow was alright too.
Jo-Jo your a noob I guess. It was a good effort and the battle was reall close.I liked your flow and structure alot more than RI but your opening and closing were weak. Good job though! Proud of ya!
Vote:Remixed Illusion
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Ewwww! @ this battle! Smmfh..
Originality - Neither
Flow - illusion
Punches - Neither
Personals - Neither/both
Structure - illusion
Multis - illusion
VoTe = illusion
Coz he had a bit of a flow an the tructure made it easier to follow.. had a few ok multis goin on too.
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