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Thread: I.J.L. Anthemn

  1. December 17th, 2003, 05:01 AM #1
    SmokaJoka
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    I.J.L. Anthemn

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    Corrupted Visions: Break Up - Masta C
    Snipin' Mothafuckers Now - Se7eN
    YOUNGNUT - NEW SHIT... - ChokeDogg
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    Everyone spit 8 lines except for Rapid....overall i gotta say nice work to IJL...and to u peeps who read....actually read the verses cuz there is some tight work in each emcees drop...

    ~RaPiDfIrE~:
    My spits is sicc shit that'll smack n bring ya..
    down cuz I'm always 'up in shit' like 'Michael Jacksons finger'..
    my miracles won't stop, u a victim of my lyrical on-slaught..
    n like R Kelly in that video, u feel that I'm on top..
    u couldn't buy skills at a pawn shop, I'll piss on ya brain..
    cuz my style got more copycats that Saddam Hussein..
    u ain't 'shit', but all these emcees still say u smelly..
    I'll smack ya, leavin more bandaids on ur face than nelly..
    I'll give ya 3 blasts, u collapse quicka than Sally Struthers knee caps..
    relapse, no rematch then I abuse ya til ya neighbors call defax..
    detatch ya spine, then rhyme on ya dumb lines..
    cuz u go in more children than bullets at columbine...


    Bio*Chemist:
    Sending disses with sadistic writins inflicting opponents with IJL's
    labs secrets. Check my 'Bio' stats, I'm known for spiting at 'Emcees'
    with a 'Squared Chemist Equation' of 'Math'. When producing topics
    of rippin the 'Ab' of 'Demons'. Like 'Slaves' I spit 'Frees' threw this
    anthemn and 'In CAP ture textcees'. Compared to IJL all these emcees
    do is 'Buzz' when dropping, so we stay squashing 'Bee's' and breaking
    Their '-Steez- (Stings)'. I.J.L brings technique. End This Deep Fight, call
    us -Free Hand Artists- with a handless Mic cuz we can still 'Pre Slice'


    DaIllestReBel:
    At first glance, no need for enhance, battle us? U don't stand a chance...
    'Crowd favorite', stealin weapons from Mortal Kombat and hand u fans...
    Insane jokers, rhyme so high above the level we illegal in poker...
    We provokers, we cause losses to all crews that are just mediocre...
    Leave these cats horrified, terrified, the talent's out n supplied...
    It's verified, u'll have a betta chance of livin-committin-suicide...
    At straight path to victory, no bumps on the road, not even a curve..
    It's IJL becomin the best the crew on this site, and thass werd...


    ÞAÝÑîMØ:
    What crew u know that will sabotage a bonviage n trip after C4'n ya boat
    Battle me? The kid who drinks the blood of lambs after slittin its throat.....
    IJL reppin this all, swingin with fists clean and stickin ya Jaws
    work on ya flaws..we high caliber while u kids merely packing straws.....
    Rhymes that are just a tease...exert ya knees pleadin for me
    I'm shatterin emcees..wreckin ya home, u kids are soft like R&B.....
    Ur explodin like retarded Suicide bombers forgettin to light the fuse
    There's a certain few thats destined to lose, it's ya fate just choose.....


    SmokaJoka666:
    Spittin In Depth, Touchin More Lives Than The Grim Reaper Himself..
    Can't Tell We Dent Health? How U Makin Cash When U Lent Sells??
    Kill In Vein, I'll Lower Ur 'Self-ES teem' Like 'Migdet Spanish Trains'..
    We're Insane, Like Crossdressers With One Outfit..We'll Never Change..
    Now What?? How Are U Showin Heart With Ur Aortic Valve Shut??
    How Tough Are Ya?? When U Got Softer Emcees Than Powder..
    We're Causin Trauma, U Gonna Spit Sick When U Gotta Vomit??
    U Can't Block This Contest, I'ma Prophet The Lyrical Nostradamus..


    peace
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    Last edited by SmokaJoka; December 17th, 2003 at 05:05 AM

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  2. December 17th, 2003, 05:05 AM #2
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    hmmm...not bad

    stood out - smoker, panimo

    weakest link - bio chemist some of his lines didnt rhyme

    not bad overal

    if duded keep elevating they can be good writters

    peace

    oh yeah smoka...go and check out the Agents open mic...its hilarious

    peace

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  3. December 17th, 2003, 07:22 AM #3
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    whats up guys???? this is exteecee aka xtreme diagnosis..... where the fuck is stiched at.....??? anyways this was good yall came pretty tight i like how yall dont focus on mutlies and shit you jus rap and say what you have to say.... i have to do a colab with all you guys...i thought i had yall on my list or atleast smoka and stitched.......anyways heres my email...

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  4. December 17th, 2003, 03:23 PM #4
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    Yea i wuz feelin this, i like rapid fires verse the best then Smokas, but everybody came nice, Bio chemist just shoulda split his bars up a little better 2 make it easier to read and follow, overall nice collab tho.
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  5. December 17th, 2003, 06:37 PM #5
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    Ty for critique...

    Good work..IJL..
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  6. December 17th, 2003, 11:08 PM #6
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    yeah yeah uppin this mofo......91)
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  7. December 18th, 2003, 12:35 AM #7
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    Smoka...I like any rhyme you lay down...and Rapid's was ill as hell..gj to everyone else to
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  8. December 21st, 2003, 01:02 PM #8
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    nice 1 fam.. all u fuckfaces rep'd nicely thru this peice.. ^^^^going up?
    ^^u damn right yo.. 2bad i missed out on this 1.. next time yo.1
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  9. December 21st, 2003, 04:28 PM #9
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    thought this was ok...nuthin special....but most verses had some good points... thought smoka...came with the best verse...the weakest ,,bio.... but all in all not a bad colab....thought the verses were a good length when there are so many...pZ
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  10. December 21st, 2003, 07:04 PM #10
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    yeah..I thought it was ok..Nothing special to see. if anything, Smoka's verse stood out most. Everybody has alot to work on.
    Hence Forward.. BURR!
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  11. December 22nd, 2003, 02:36 PM #11
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    honestly i think Rapid dropped the best...lol....catch the flow of the verses and u will see.....and yeah...this isnt the best we can do...i know we can do better...check Bio's drop called "My Rage..." and u'll change ur opinion of him....

    peace

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  12. December 22nd, 2003, 03:55 PM #12
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    that was tight man all of ya had some nice shit...............................
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  13. December 22nd, 2003, 04:21 PM #13
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    Hmmm...This Was Ok...Nothing Really Stood Out For Me...Some Kids Had Good Flow, But Ya Other Areas Lacked...Wordplay Seemed Forced And Same As Multi's..

    But Keep Workin On It..
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  14. January 15th, 2004, 06:56 PM #14
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    Nice Glad To See We Are Getting Some Where
    Boi Its Like They Still Not Understanding
    You Gotta Break It Down More Simple For Them
    I Know y? Cause Some Tiems Simple Is Good

    Every One Rep It Well
    I Aint Seem Da illest IN A min
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    You All Trying To Tell me Iam Need
    OT Start Droping More By This Collab If SO Then U Got It
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    <center>IJL
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    ^Blast The Competition^

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