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    Roll Out The Barrel N-Demik's Avatar
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    Lights & Deaf

    Check, faulty dialogue, this cost is sentenced to death
    its overhead the plummet downhill into retention we quest
    All forward to lengthen the mess, beyond metric dimension
    idealisms truanting from perception of ecletic perfection
    But so what? People indulge in these kind of mislead motions
    to insist that 20 wrongs make a right like incest's woven
    Into the appropriate papers of every matrimony proceeding
    leading to parental maturity, forcing adolescence into weaping
    Actions of treason against your evolved seeds, the mold bleeds
    free'd the immoral characteristics, there ain't no more "hold me's"
    That's just an awful case scenario, the apex of train wrecks
    I hate this! Being that Earth is just an alias for fray rests
    Not resting dormant though, believe me, the torment shows!
    not only through body language or emotion or the war woes
    It's more like every instance you're not blinking or sleeping
    you envision distinct things like souls sinking or freezing
    This system of breathing was just an excuse for drinking, enriching
    the death toll, we've used up all the life, living is fiction
    We've driven the Styx in, we all listen, just don't pay interest
    word was never born, Mother Nature was on the pill during sex
    We then use this mess to feed ignorance, images become debatable
    throwing spanners in our work till our income states then fall
    Left to face the storm, sandbags amiss, man's back in the abyss
    defined by this wisdom eclipse, ransacking through the mist
    Till I happen upon...nothing, but somethings stacking the scorn
    born to harbor the product of Stigmata, all lacking reform
    The brackets were torn, now paragraphs exude from context
    content under duress to re-invent blasphemy to renew the vortex
    Of whore sex portraited within the tainted cerebral cortex
    the depths of Hell rebelled and we're all snared in Hades forceps
    No one insisted a four step regime to exhume arcane theroies
    so it doesn't seem as farfetched facing this series of queries
    Where we're in the nearing of long term heart felt ramifications
    as managing situations exists as a form mislead anticipation
    Here we're caving, the claustrophobic - not the only home goers
    half the globe the ford focused, the rest.. the stone throwers
    The pebbles dashed, semi skimmed our limbs, injured our skin
    the ears of the wall can't hear what our whispering's housing
    In a bid for reprisal, confidence uprising is held at eBay
    we stay contorted, extorted in sum, for some there's hell to pay
    We melt away against the grain, make a beeline for an A Train
    just the same old, same old mint sayings, but nothing's the same
    Stuck in the same....phase, with different behavior patterns
    I'm timed out for a New York minute, but why stay in Manhatten?
    Allday is a madden, hard backs carrying sacks, hailing Mary
    for the visionless inciting idiots exclaiming brail's impairing
    And they failed to merit from life, confused like foreign homage
    as to why people assume living is beautiful was common knowledge.

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    YOU ARE WITHOUT A DOUBT A CAPTIVATING LYRICIST CARABLE OF ALLURING ANYONE TO BE ENWRAPPED WITHIN YOUR RHYMES I ENJOYED THIS A GREAT DEAL AND WISH TO HEAR AUDIO .THIS EMBODIED ALL THE ELEMENTS THOUGH LENGTHY IS HOW.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    damn this was just fucking dope.
    a very damn good painter w/. words
    the images were descrived very vividly.
    props man
    Bribeone
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    that was fuckin tight

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    You have some of the best imagery I've read, I enjoy everything that I've read of yours.. This was mos def 1 of my favorites.

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    iller than yall: word to how shit your open mic was
    iller than yall: you fell off = /
    RalphsBagels: SORRY !
    iller than yall: my bad
    iller than yall: message was meant for N Demik
    RalphsBagels: hahah

    iller than yall: i love you N Demik
    iller than yall: Youre my idol
    ArrowbiciswacC: Yes, well, what can I say?!
    Last edited by N-Demik; December 16th, 2003 at 07:13 PM

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    this was tha nivest Piece I Have read.........Whoa......ya Flow Kills and Ya Structure is Just as Good........Vocab was Excellent Man so was Ya Word Play Made tha Picture in My Head.....This Is the First Piece i have read By You and I will look out fo More Man this was Tight Man Tight.....p.€.a.c.€.........

    o can ya Hit Up "Never Take A Chance" Thanx Man
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    Thanks alot for all the replies(Except Cam - Idiot)

    Appreciate it

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    Blah .. be glad i even read it. Space rapper bullshit with an off flow due to too many syllables in each line.

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    Yes..I love you too Cam

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    ...Wow..this by far on of the nicest piece I've read in a minute...Your concept and flow was right on point...Keep up..

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    Thank you LastPoet

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    Shit. What the fuck am I suppossed to say? This is the best fucking drop I've read in a week. You could be a pro. Keep this shit up.


    Female power

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    ^ I HOPE YOU WEREN'T SERIOUS WITH THE LAST COMMENT.

    But yeah, if people see i've posted in here it will get more replies


    POST POST POST! I KNOW YOU SEEING I REPLIED YOOOOOOOO!

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    LMAO

    Fuck off Cam..don't make me have to start deleting your irrelevant posts

    Thanks for reading skitten

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