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    Newbie rayman g's Avatar
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    Post remember tha name

    I simply ain't nuthin to mess with, RAYMAN G be the name
    Get this straight in ya brain, I'm ahead of the game
    Guess you heard of my fame, I'm drivin ladies insane
    Now I'm at it again guess yawl tired of the pain
    Want the end of my reign but I'ma reign some mo
    Bring pain to every foe yawl prepare to fall
    While my whole crew ball, lyrically boostin the death toll
    And we movin every ho straight across the dancefloor
    I'm grabbin 3 or maybe 4, shine brighter than a supernova
    The black Casanova grab the mic and it's over!
    I'm an auto you a revolver, a Hummer you a Rover
    It ain't over til you sober til I come with the solver

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    I THINK I TRIED

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    YOU GOT GREAT WORDPLAY BUT THIOS FELL VERY SIMPLE NOTHING REALLY ASTONISHING.......YOU HAD NO REAL CLIMAX POINT....SO IN THE END FELL LIKE SOME RANDOM RABLINGS...YOUR WORDPLAY IS HOT BUT EVERYTHING ELSE DOES NEED WORK.STAY UP
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed. Thanks.

    But yeah this was ok.....your structure was alright, could be a bit better i thought though....you had some good wordplay like Word said....flow in this was ok, it fell off at points though....but keep at it.

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    thank you people

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    The wordplay in this was not good.. It was terriby wack.. I would have called you the biggestherb ever if it wasn't for that Casanova line.. The flow was okay,, but waaaaaaaayy to basic to kick it over a beat.. Elevate and Stay Up
    Pot` Ed.

    I dropped to show RM what hot was;
    And this faggot got Butterflies in his stomach the size of Mothra

    Your text is just another weak display
    One fist to your eye'll make it go through that black album remix phase. - Saviour Arraign

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    it was iight your wordplay i thougt was too basic

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    maybe i tried

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    I warned you about the links, but you post back twice without links so this is Closed...Get Links Next Time.

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