8 lines
no hate or d/r
20 mins
check in
this my check in then i spit
UnParalled
Lewd
8 lines
no hate or d/r
20 mins
check in
this my check in then i spit
Unfortuanantly for u,its time to go 4 n 0,
after im done murdin u,they sendn me to death row.
They sayin who killed who, identifiable defenently "No"
onlything they know is,a bloody body parallel to da snow.
Even puzzel makers couldn't even put u back together,
just to get u out the fuckin ice, the needed a BlacknDecker.
Havn't you heard the rumor,they call me the homewrecker,
when u look at naked girls ur dicks UnParalled to my giant pecker.
*blackndecker makes snowblowers
I'll announce yur' defeat,It seems that your pri-ority is not even to trounce me.
But more less,that this Predator,is lookin' for an oppur-tunity,to Pounce on Meat.
I'll Vegitate this Fruit when I proceed with speed to Plant you Six Feet Deep.
Placed Under My Feet,You like Mat Wrestlers,Cuz you have the perfect Ground Technique.
This Fag relates to Lil' Flip Cd's,the way he can't drop without gettin' Screwed.
You not cool,Your verse is just Meaningless Babble,like Cd InterLEWDS.(interludes)
I'm wreckin' this whore,And as quick as you came in,I'm showin' you the door.
Leave you Restin' in yur' own Blood,Now you Im-BEDDED in yur' own Gore.
This kid's Flesh is Weak,So I'm leaving you tore With multiple Leaks.
Ladys First....Now it's obvious to see,why this Pussy Volunteered to drop Before me.
Blah........Not much....Just Testin' ya....Uppin'
unparalle go check into our battle dawg and spit your verse.. how long do i have to wait.............................................. ................................
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unparalled
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strecthed lines, and some played aswell....not good to be honest
lewd
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you took this man....closer was ok....best bit of the battle!
nothin special from any1.....but....
vote = lewd
hit up my battle wiv T.J. Money please...thanks
laterz
METAPHORES - UnParalled
VOCABULARY - UnParalled
PUNCHLINES - UnParalled
STRUCTURE - tie
CREATIVITY - UnParalled
PERSONALS - UnParalled
OPENING - UnParalled
CLOSING - UnParalled
MULTIES - UnParalled
FLOW - Lewd
OVERALL - UnParalled
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UN got this he came harder with the punches and had more multi's. Lewd your verse was coo just need to work on the punches talking bout they needed a black n decker to get em out the ice? so what you need more personals the flows was coo though. UN the line bout interludes i was feeling, vote UN
peep my battle with j-yo please.
vote - UN
His vocab was much stronger, I wasn't really fond of the style and structure, but his punchlines were hitting harder than Lewd's verse overall....good battle otherwise.
vote on this. plz.
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Da blakest nigga dis side of da moon.
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Get Aktive Nigga...
-blakout-
uppin this battle get some votes in here
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